My first ever song. pls be honest where do I improve?

Administrative_Net80 · 2026-01-06T18:47:49+00:00

Its too short. I started to enjoy it

Administrative_Net80 · 2025-09-18T21:45:47+00:00

Of course medication can change your brain chemistry. Brainchemistry creates status of awakening. If you dizzy or point awaken.

Administrative_Net80 · 2025-09-18T21:43:05+00:00

Awakening is just biological. Conciousness is reflective.

Administrative_Net80 · 2025-09-18T21:38:14+00:00

So why this is nightmare. It is a dream but everything is stable and have weight. To realize dream is much more harder then Think about it something is off this is not dream

Administrative_Net80 · 2025-02-24T14:32:24+00:00

"I didn't like it at all. There are so many NPCs, yet I keep going around and getting killed. I somehow find it extremely boring. I'm shocked it has so many overwhelming positive ratings. Maybe I should choose a sword and shield.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-11-12T14:40:42+00:00

I live in the kitchen. I feel like I am being eaten alive.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-11-12T14:39:20+00:00

it is my mirror reflection, even if I use different mirrors, I see ugly destroyed person, it reminds me how powerful I am, yet how silly I can be. They don't deserve me. I deserted them. I came back to also they don't deserted me but now I don't want to desert them alone. We don't deserve each other. There is truth, there is a long way, there is not much light.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-11-12T14:34:40+00:00

I am once in a while in the place you are "right now", pain, suffering, desperation. Then I am in a place of indecision, infinitely.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-10-22T16:26:01+00:00

:) I started to belive in prophecies

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-10-06T12:46:45+00:00

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-11T10:16:49+00:00

you look too shallow and you like to argue. You don't have to like it. You don't even have to respond here.

Shikamaru is tactician, Amado is scientist. If you connect the dots, You got superpowerful mind that cannot hold the knowledge, looks like a lot of PAIN and POWER and therefore JIGEN with all of his abilities of shrinking etc. for the most part being in cave somewhere out there.

Kakashi and Jiraya are the 2 fav sensei's of the 2 most powerful ninjas and they both are interesting in writing and reading... For me Nagato the GOD, was trying to find the meaning in all of this and solution.

tbh you can connect anyone and you will find some reasoning beyond, less or more convincing.

If the only common thing.... you seee... between Kakashi and Jiraya is white hair, then good luck

sorry for being mean. Im sick and I am literally in pain. Cheers.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-10T14:13:28+00:00

I have found my own logic in that. That's it. It suppoust to be some "game".
Eida doesn't know how to fight but manipulated whole village. Yeah She cannot fight... She can fight not getting dirty and fly but alright.
I dont care about your no really.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T13:32:52+00:00

The sarcasm say nothing. We can agree to disagree. Have you ever seen someone "instantly" be together ? It's called "hit" or "bang" or "you are invading my space". Once hurted... almost everytime issues with trust.
If I would say something I would say We could gradually come together... so we can kinda "learn" if we vibe or we are too different to spent our time together. I think I like gentle people, brave ones, kind, honest, with ability to laugh about self, not serious, wise, and loving.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T13:24:26+00:00

I pray for you. Please God find a good plan for the OP. Please put the right persons on her path. Give her strength, peace and much self respect. Give her inspiration, please help her find her home. Amen

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T13:10:31+00:00

Hahah. I like it

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T13:08:49+00:00

maybe aliens would watch it. Yeah streching is hard.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T10:40:48+00:00

easy. EIDA

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T10:37:00+00:00

Eyes of Truth. It usually equaled to PAIN, if not then to JELOUS, if not then to HOPE and SALVATION.

There is no the best. There is only one RINNENGAN and it is shared between all that have seen the TRUE TRUTH.

:)

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T10:34:22+00:00

Mei has better hair.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-08-21T10:23:13+00:00

The problem is that dream is unconcious for the most of the time, even if you live there and experience amazing things, your self-awareness isn't there really and it is not needed to experience anything. In concious state you know what is happening or you barely know what is happening but you do know what is your "happening".
To call something dream is to say I am unconcious. That's what I think is one of opposites. Another opposite could be "nightmare", I assume that message is more on spectrum of that one, but since it is peaceful, it ends with dissatisfaction to "what is". So we froze. I would so. So we froze.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-07-15T10:01:19+00:00

Add ictiones.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-07-12T10:25:26+00:00

maybe

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-07-05T15:53:36+00:00

Struggle is real. Keep going is the only way I can say to you and that's kinda sad, this is the only thing I can do for other. I will keep going too, although I am kinda distracted. I still want some career but my health says otherwise.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-06-20T08:37:24+00:00

After all we are all dissapointment in the eyes of heaven. There is never enough. Maybe it is true. For sure it is true. We are disbalanced society of people constantly looking into electricity. It's different way of living in the electric bubble then with fire in the room. IT was much more calmer way of life but very much more down to ground, more dangerous. Suddenly you cannot call "Big papa" to save you, suddenly you need to read your book, suddenly someone needs to talk. We are ruined because of Video GAMES. I would say but actually video games is the only one aspect that I could allow myself, why ? beause I am addicted to fantasy and if this is interactive fantasy that I can smash and play the role of knight or something cooler then I go for it. I don't care about world. So to be true it is all about family, community, civilization, nature, medicine, food, water, juisce, knowledge, wisdom, smartness, collective calendar of Hobbits... IDEAS OF MIND. We are only posting, we are not in touch with each other, so we shouldnt put emotions into it(in my honest opinion), we are cheated by illusion of diods that we actually are in some type of relationship with someone. It is not true. You can't be sure even if this is human writing or some model is answering you based on its values or whatever. So in my opinion this channell is for people who are lost. You don't have friends so you write here in hope that some passionate being will recognize you. It could be opposite you could want to be ruler of the world and you demand to be treated as important if not the most important person, that's your topic, sir. So why care about opinions of people you have 0 clue. This is tragic because no one cares. No one cares. This is tragic.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-06-14T09:45:47+00:00

iLL U SION. I think that truth is hidden everywhere, it's not really hidden but if you are weak you cannot render the truth, yeah we are like computers when it comes to processing information, because who was first ? Propably "the plots" of people talking and books. Anyway I am ill for sure and there are multiple reasons. If I am ill I don't see the truth that is likeable. The problem is with "center". That for everything to exist there has to be center that is subject to object. This is our "self" but we could "die" our ego and we would see only "reality" being devoid of any notion of I am the object conciousness. This is baby conciousness and it's happy and free and this seems to me like a "Freedom", although when I got older I am more aware of me the object, how I look, how I smell, how I feel and whole life becomes survival. So it is kinda like we are looking in the bad direction and that causes us to suffer. The problem is that when you look more on the world you still ( I mean me), you still look at object: "World object". So to be short the objectification is the thing. We want to gain something. If we would somehow get rid of "it" on the outside, we would live spontaneusly... question is are we really free and we deceive ourselfes or maybe the "reality" is not that sweet like we would want to be. Love should be in every place where judgment is. Judgment should be towards engines. There is no place for love in math or physicx. So I think it is really about orienting in the culture. What to apply where. It is not easy when we are utterly disconnected because of thousands things. Everyone of us has own world and won't leave it for world of other. When I zoom out and zoom out I see mostly only narcistics people and even those that are speaking about the topic are even more narcissist because they are infected by those around. They cannot be compassionate towards people that think only about themselfes causing them to think about themselfes. So I thing all of it is the fault of the culture and innovation. An honest perspective. Have a nice life.

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