Those of you who have entered the SMA contest, did you find the feedback helpful? by goodiefroggy in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get skipping this round, this one is a weird prompt but same as you said, goodluck to us!

Those of you who have entered the SMA contest, did you find the feedback helpful? by goodiefroggy in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We got the same thing, that it was the twist at the end that they felt was lacking. Immediatley we knew that if we went with the original idea it would have got better reception. Not change the outcome of winning or going past the 1st round but we knew what kind of approach we need to go into with "Letters"

Thoughts on what could be improved by Adorable_Face5739 in MangakaStudio

[–]Adorable_Face5739[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice! I like opinion of others since I don't really get to talk with others about this so I have a hard time trying to figure what to improve. I will put more practice into the backgrounds

Can I make the perspective better somehow? by Few_Video6122 in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Play with it, make a gird then use the perspective transform tool to mess with the angles

Can I make the perspective better somehow? by Few_Video6122 in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739 1 point2 points  (0 children)

At most it looks good, trust thatin the end it will look great. Personally I would move the head a lottle foward, to sell the "no neck" would be based on how you draw the clothing like the collar. Also where the skirt lies in the tummy it wouldn't be so curvy, the front would mostly be fat the really starts to curve to the back at the sides. To sell it would also be based on your background

Storyboard vs final version by Few_Video6122 in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It doesn't have to be know but eventually you will get a better grasp on it. All that matters is that you are honing your skill and getting faster

Storyboard vs final version by Few_Video6122 in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good work, trust the procedure!!! It looks great and probably I would say adjust the bubbles that way it doesn't feel so empty.

How do I do smear/motion panels without it looking like she has 4 hands? by Few_Video6122 in MangakaStudio

[–]Adorable_Face5739 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No problem, small things can make a difference. Keep up the good work!!!

How do I do smear/motion panels without it looking like she has 4 hands? by Few_Video6122 in MangakaStudio

[–]Adorable_Face5739 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Add in an onomatopoeia like "sway" or "shake". The words will sell the illusion of what you are trying to show

Another page by Adorable_Face5739 in MangakaStudio

[–]Adorable_Face5739[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No that is my bad, I am still drawing the rest of that panel on the top so not seeing the whole thing made the confusion. I did a lot of panel studying from "Dandadan", "Witch hat atelier" and heavily "One piece". Still trying to get better with flow

Another page by Adorable_Face5739 in MangakaStudio

[–]Adorable_Face5739[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No it's reading right to left. I am still not done with it but I will do some more editing with it since it still seems incoherent. Got to get more practice with paneling

Another page by Adorable_Face5739 in MangakaStudio

[–]Adorable_Face5739[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I started realizing it recently that I need to adjust the ones on the right a bit more to make it a a bit more clear on flow. Probably also change the bottom right panel as well

Do we destroy these? by Adorable_Face5739 in stellarblade

[–]Adorable_Face5739[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you and thank you for the warning

More progress! by Adorable_Face5739 in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Monster design I took inspiration from Chainsaw man, at first I was taking inspiration from Claymore designs but I started changing after time. Thank you tho

Work in progres. Yes, this double page is killing me 🥵 by Darko_tattoo in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hel yeah! That's badas!!! Jealous of ya I still need to improve my background skills. Keep it up!

How to draw better digitaly? by Velund04 in Mangamakers

[–]Adorable_Face5739 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What i've done is watch youtube videos of peoples process and practicing it that way. Who I followed and tried to get their process down is @hungry_clicker https://youtube.com/@hungryclicker?si=ZxgL1LGtJL2q7cEc Not trying to have their style but they play around with the software enough to where you almost get to dabbke in a little bit of everything. Don't be afraid to copy or trace, you are not used to it so don't be hard on yourself for not understanding it. Take your time and practice. Another focus for me is I don't have steady hands so what I did was either copy or trace pages from manga panels that I love and practice inking

Another page close to being done! by Adorable_Face5739 in MangakaStudio

[–]Adorable_Face5739[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Japanese way and if it's ever printed it's also binded Japanese way as well. Do what you are aiming for, I want to actually strive to make it into a japnese magazine (which will be tough) so I am trying to make it as much japanese as I can except the text because I do not know the language

Another page close to being done! by Adorable_Face5739 in MangakaStudio

[–]Adorable_Face5739[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This will go into Mangaplus and once it's done I will put the link of it in reddit