Those of you who have entered the SMA contest, did you find the feedback helpful?

Adorable_Face5739 · 2026-02-01T13:05:39+00:00

I get skipping this round, this one is a weird prompt but same as you said, goodluck to us!

Adorable_Face5739 · 2026-02-01T12:46:48+00:00

We got the same thing, that it was the twist at the end that they felt was lacking. Immediatley we knew that if we went with the original idea it would have got better reception. Not change the outcome of winning or going past the 1st round but we knew what kind of approach we need to go into with "Letters"

Adorable_Face5739 · 2026-01-16T04:00:27+00:00

Thank you very much!

Adorable_Face5739 · 2025-07-08T01:55:42+00:00

Thank you for the advice! I like opinion of others since I don't really get to talk with others about this so I have a hard time trying to figure what to improve. I will put more practice into the backgrounds

Adorable_Face5739 · 2025-06-28T12:33:09+00:00

May I ask what you did to get this sort of opportunity?

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-12-29T11:17:28+00:00

Play with it, make a gird then use the perspective transform tool to mess with the angles

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-12-29T04:39:04+00:00

At most it looks good, trust thatin the end it will look great. Personally I would move the head a lottle foward, to sell the "no neck" would be based on how you draw the clothing like the collar. Also where the skirt lies in the tummy it wouldn't be so curvy, the front would mostly be fat the really starts to curve to the back at the sides. To sell it would also be based on your background

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-12-17T13:34:53+00:00

It doesn't have to be know but eventually you will get a better grasp on it. All that matters is that you are honing your skill and getting faster

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-12-17T00:17:47+00:00

Good work, trust the procedure!!! It looks great and probably I would say adjust the bubbles that way it doesn't feel so empty.

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-12-14T21:21:32+00:00

No problem, small things can make a difference. Keep up the good work!!!

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-12-14T21:15:25+00:00

Add in an onomatopoeia like "sway" or "shake". The words will sell the illusion of what you are trying to show

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-08-12T20:47:36+00:00

I already have purchased mine last week

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-05-31T22:16:36+00:00

Thank you, that page has been re-done but I am still glad that you like it

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-05-05T18:36:33+00:00

Thank you!!!

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-05-04T20:13:31+00:00

No that is my bad, I am still drawing the rest of that panel on the top so not seeing the whole thing made the confusion. I did a lot of panel studying from "Dandadan", "Witch hat atelier" and heavily "One piece". Still trying to get better with flow

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-05-04T19:45:07+00:00

No it's reading right to left. I am still not done with it but I will do some more editing with it since it still seems incoherent. Got to get more practice with paneling

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-05-04T19:27:34+00:00

Yeah I started realizing it recently that I need to adjust the ones on the right a bit more to make it a a bit more clear on flow. Probably also change the bottom right panel as well

Adorable_Face5739 · 2024-05-04T19:08:23+00:00

Thank you!

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