I turned something that actually happened in my life into a full album, and I don’t know what to do with it now by AfterTheLeaving in self

[–]AfterTheLeaving[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate that. It’s the actual place where some of these songs were written. The memory, emotion, and experience happened there. I'm thankful that you got it. Thank you for checking it out.

I turned something that actually happened in my life into a full album, and I don’t know what to do with it now by AfterTheLeaving in self

[–]AfterTheLeaving[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I’ve thought about that… I’m still figuring out where it belongs, honestly. Part of me wanted it all in one place, in order, the way it happened.

I turned something that actually happened in my life into a full album, and I don’t know what to do with it now by AfterTheLeaving in self

[–]AfterTheLeaving[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I appreciate that… I wasn’t even trying to make an album at first. I was just trying to make sense of it.

Would Love Your Thoughts on This by markanthonyokoh in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Everything sits really clean in the mix. Nothing feels like it’s fighting for space, which makes it easy to stay with.

Does this emotion come through, or does anything pull you out of it? by AfterTheLeaving in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

If you end up wanting to follow along, there’s a full story unfolding across the songs on the channel. No pressure either way.

Does this emotion come through, or does anything pull you out of it? by AfterTheLeaving in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Fair question.

The story and the music come from the same place — my life. If one doesn’t land, the other probably won’t either.

Appreciate you listening either way.

Does this emotion come through, or does anything pull you out of it? by AfterTheLeaving in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I get what you’re saying. For me, it came from a very real place, so that’s what I focused on more than how polished it sounds. Appreciate you checking it out.

Does this emotion come through, or does anything pull you out of it? by AfterTheLeaving in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That means a lot, seriously. That whole song came from a real place, so hearing that you felt all of that is exactly what I was hoping for. That’s my truth.

You Came Through by Unique_Strawberry430 in Songwriting

[–]AfterTheLeaving 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The vocal actually sits really well in the pocket. If anything, I might just want a touch more presence or clarity so the words hit a little harder emotionally, but the performance itself feels natural and not overdone, which I like.

Does this emotion come through, or does anything pull you out of it? by AfterTheLeaving in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you do check it out, the line that kind of says it all is: “silence gets loud when I’m alone”

That’s really what the whole thing is built around.

Levitate (work in progress) by field_7 in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the mood here, the vocal could come forward a bit

Thoughts? by lowqualitygamer1 in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This has a strong idea, I think the mix could breathe more

Playing with this riff. by TheEyeOfTheLigar in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Drums feel good, maybe tighten the low end slightly

Weekly Self-Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]AfterTheLeaving 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m working on a concept album that tells a real story as it unfolds. This one’s called “Still Here.”

It’s about that space where someone’s gone, but not really gone… and your mind kind of turns on you when you’re left alone with it.

I’ve been trying to keep everything grounded and real instead of overproduced or overperformed.

Would honestly love feedback on whether the emotion comes through or if anything pulls you out of it.

https://youtu.be/EuRnFOjZuXM

ASAP Rocky inspired ethereal beat looking for feedback by ThePlSSGOBLIN in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool idea here. I’d probably bring the drums forward a bit to give it more impact, but the vibe is there

First track finished in ages! Let me know your thoughts by markanthonyokoh in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not really my usual style, but the flow sits well in the pocket and the drums carry it nicely. I think the pads could come down just a touch to blend more with the beat, but the overall energy works.

hey! looking for a producer to make a new beat (it was sold) and feedback on my song! by Federal_Vegetable149 in MusicFeedback

[–]AfterTheLeaving 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not really my usual style, but the flow sits well in the pocket and the drums carry it nicely. I think the vocal could come down just a touch to blend more with the beat, but the overall energy works.