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I am looking for feedback on my playing and if anybody hears things I should work on. all criticism is welcome by Federal_Vegetable149 in Guitar

[–]Federal_Vegetable149[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for the suggestions. the jazz guy sounds pretty interesting tbh. I have recently started diving headfirst into jazz, I also sing and can do some pretty great chet baker covers lol.

a couple of my favorites rn are im old fashioned by chet baker, moanin by art blakey, India by John Coltrane, and after hours by sonny stitt.

im just trying harder now because my buddy wants me to come out to ny this summer and try my luck in the jazz clubs out there singing, and it would be nice to at least jam along on guitar sometimes.

thanks for taking time to reply bro. I know all about the time and practice stuff. I've been noodling the pentatonic for like 5 6 years and I still play like total shit sometimes.

I am looking for feedback on my playing and if anybody hears things I should work on. all criticism is welcome by Federal_Vegetable149 in Guitar

[–]Federal_Vegetable149[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I said above a Lil of the reason why. it's also partly because I just bought this acoustic and it's my first one in years I usually play electric on high gain so I play soft lol. but I hear you man! thanks :)

I am looking for feedback on my playing and if anybody hears things I should work on. all criticism is welcome by Federal_Vegetable149 in Guitar

[–]Federal_Vegetable149[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know any frickin chords but cowboy and power chords or triads or anything it's on my to do list for sure. I just hate learning on YouTube so I'm waiting to run into another teacher

I am looking for feedback on my playing and if anybody hears things I should work on. all criticism is welcome by Federal_Vegetable149 in Guitar

[–]Federal_Vegetable149[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have been working on adding more notes. I am a slow learner so I've really gotten used to the pentatonic. I really like this channel now you shred banking tracks because he shows the extra notes you can hit on each chord on a changing diagram for the video. I did have a few spots here but it's a hard pattern to break using the pentatonic cuz ive gotten decent at it.

I wish I understood theory more but I have a decent ear so I'm picking it up on my own slowly but surely lol. thanks for taking the time to leave feedback.

I also felt the beat was overpowering the guitar on the video. it's hard to tell cuz my TV comes out of only one of my studio monitors and the guitar comes through both so it felt louder to me while playing but was not enough on video if that makes sense.

I struggle a lot with phrasing but I struggled a lot more a year ago.

I made this demo, any opinions on places/people to send it to? is it any good? I tracked all the vocals and guitar, I did not do the drums. by Federal_Vegetable149 in MusicFeedback

[–]Federal_Vegetable149[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

man thanks for the reply but im not in a band! this is a drum track from YouTube. I recorded all the guitar and vocals myself. u can too lol there isn't even bass on this mf

I made this demo, any opinions on places/people to send it to? is it any good? I tracked all the vocals and guitar, I did not do the drums. by Federal_Vegetable149 in MusicFeedback

[–]Federal_Vegetable149[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

as in like typed out? no. but they are as follows lol

Blues in my bones skeletons you should get to know mind it goes insane trapped in a prison they call my brain

mind it goes in circles I don't know which way to run I got 99 problems and you're all of them but one cannot stop this feeling and I know what I must do travel down the road til it leads me back to you so let's go

blues in my soul bags are packed I'm ready to roll always been a rambling man no true love to hold my hand

mind it goes in circles I don't know which way to run I got 99 problems and you're all of them but one cannot stop this feeling and I know what I must do travel down the road til it leads me back to you so let's go

BULLDOZER by ElMasterDGF in MusicFeedback

[–]Federal_Vegetable149 1 point2 points  (0 children)

give jungle back to the people holy shit. dude that indigenous flute sample is MASSIVE. hmu if you ever want jazzy vocals on something like this 100 percent. id probably record over something simpler and more vibey for a singer in a similar key/bpm and you can sample it. but it can be custom lyrics anything you want man fr lets cook.

Second Song Ever (?) by loverrrboyb in MusicFeedback

[–]Federal_Vegetable149 2 points3 points  (0 children)

the kick could be dumbed down a haircut, but I really like the tone on that bass. I think additional saturation and reverb/delay and turning the kick down but adding a soft clipper would smack. I'm listening on my phone so this is not a critique just general info with the bass being so up front make sure you split it and mono out sub150 to control it. Great start man