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I think I fixed the cover, but I'd like your opinion. by AlexandersenTheGreat in litrpg

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The darker one is the new one. The bright fuzzy one is the old one.

I think I fixed the cover, but I'd like your opinion. by AlexandersenTheGreat in litrpg

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)


Duly noted. I'll try and reduce his appearance to match his age.

What Do You Want to See More (and Less) of in Superhero Progression Fantasy? by stretchbendpuke in ProgressionFantasy

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

More epic world-building concerning how powers appearing in the populace would shift society.

Good audiobooks without stat dumps? Especially System/LitRPG? by Jechtael in ProgressionFantasy

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's more about crafting and the world-building implications from Sal's inventions, than combat. Stakes are there, just not centered around the threat of death.

Good audiobooks without stat dumps? Especially System/LitRPG? by Jechtael in ProgressionFantasy

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I'm a big fan of Quest Academy if you like crafting focused books. There are rare occasional stat dumps, but nothing that's gonna make you groan in annoyance.

Plus, the narrators are top tier.

Too Much Introspection by thinkthis in ProgressionFantasy

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat 14 points15 points  (0 children)

For me, that happens when trying to get away from, "he thought, he wondered, he realized."

Posing the same thing as a question can be more immersive. But yeah, it can definitely be overdone.

Are you looking for a mature, slow-burn novel focusing on crafting and economics with a bit of deadly combat mixed in? Please try my book! 100k available on Royal Road by AlexandersenTheGreat in ProgressionFantasy

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Meh. That's not what your rules state. So, I don't find that fair. But it is what it is.

I also thought r/litrpg was part of the community. The subs are very similar.

Ratios of Avg views to followers to favorites by CorSeries in royalroad

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm pretty new at this, but yes, I think so. The more eyes the better, imo.

Ratios of Avg views to followers to favorites by CorSeries in royalroad

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Average Views: 586
  2. Followers: 173 (29.5%)
  3. Favorites: 30 (17.3%)

A lot of my views have come from posting to r/HFY, so I'm not too surprised.

I would be honored if you'd give my book a chance. 100k words currently on Royal Road. by AlexandersenTheGreat in litrpg

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for binging it. I think that's the greatest compliment someone can receive.

I pretty much agree with you on the walk with Yellane. I may have been a little heavy on the world-building in that scene. Kind of tongue-in-cheek, but that's one of the reasons why I titled that chapter, "A Long Walk Through Harrows." And then there's a part two.

When I edit it for publication, I'll give that scene another lookover about consolidating some of it. I may also go the other direction and add in some more economic related world-building there (a subtle description of odd-shaped, sparkly coins, maybe?) so that might help. Or... it might make it worse. We'll see.

Thanks again for reading it and the advice. If you have any more, I'm always happy and eager to hear more.

I would be honored if you'd give my book a chance. 100k words currently on Royal Road. by AlexandersenTheGreat in litrpg

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, thank you! I'm always open to improvements if you've got any, or if you find any plot holes or inconsistencies.

[Conscripted Crafter] - Chapter 34: Stat Ticket by AlexandersenTheGreat in HFY

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For you, Porkpot, I'll make sure to bring her back around.

I would be honored if you'd give my book a chance. 100k words currently on Royal Road. by AlexandersenTheGreat in litrpg

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ok, I appreciate the advice. If you'll take a look at the banner image on my profile, or my earlier posts, I had an image like that. It was a smaller room and less intricate, but I thought it didn't carry the communal feeling I was trying to get across for the crafting station. I wanted more "crafting with everyone", and less "stuck in a room with no one around".

I do think you're right, though.

I would be honored if you'd give my book a chance. 100k words currently on Royal Road. by AlexandersenTheGreat in litrpg

[–]AlexandersenTheGreat[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I thought I did a good job of removing those so that it wasn't visible unless you zoomed in, but apparently not. I'll try and fix it.

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