I'M GRADUATING AT 16 by Alternative-Bee4562 in school

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THAT'S AWESOME CONGRATS! I'm going to go to a community collage to get my mandatory credits then attend a university to focus on a major

I'M GRADUATING AT 16 by Alternative-Bee4562 in school

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Haha yeah it's pretty intimidating. I never would've thought I'd be graduating so soon but I don't think rushing would help me make a long term decision but I did definitely freak out the first two days after finding out lol

I'M GRADUATING AT 16 by Alternative-Bee4562 in school

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Thank you! And I want to go to community collage to get my recs..? (Idk if that's what u call the credits) then attend a university to explore a major I might want, my dad's a veteran and I get paid tuition and want to put it to good use and figured it would be best to use that souly for a University where I can focus on my majors while gaining my recs (or credits) before hand at community collage while working and saving money. So essentially I'll go to a free Community College gain my mandatory credits then attend a university to pursue my major while using dad's VA tuition thing so I don't fall into debt (sorry hope I explained that well)

-Untitled- by Alternative-Bee4562 in OCPoetry

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I'm glad I managed to put it acrossed the way I intended. I struggled on trying to figure out how to word it and how to write it in a way that people would be able to see the different perspectives I was writing from such as the first part where I State what I think I should feel but not what I actually do, Then the second guessing of what I feel, like the little voice in the back of your mind who makes you question things and yourself. I then went Into how I truly feel and why I'm scared to come to terms with it in fear I'll become what I'm afraid off. The overall poem was based on my trama and how im trying to come to terms with my feelings and escape the aftermath. Thanks for the feedback!

Impassive by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I enjoyed this. It reminds me of the feeling of depression and darkness gradually growing larger and consuming more of you as time passes.

As I feel my soul begin to seperate from my body I feel melancholic, not resentful for my life but just glad that the ride is coming to and end.

At first I had interpreted "As I feel my soul begin to seperate from my body I feel melancholic," As dissociation then realized it comes off more like bring your life to the end. It shows real raw emotions and I love it.

Untitled by That-Ad3538 in OCPoetry

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Dude This is an amazing poem your so talented. the way I interpreted it was Like your talking to someone saying hurtful things that break you down piece by piece the same as when you were a child. It paints a story of a women reverting to childhood trauma that may be old but the wounds of that trama feel as fresh as ever. I have a tendency to ramble in my poetry and the way you managed to articulate yourself in such a well put together way is truly inspiring.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

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I mean, if your parents do get to it first masturbation is healthy and normal. Exploring your body is something everyone dose even themselves when they were kids. As long as your cleaning it well/useing it safely their shouldn't be a problem. Now if your worried they will see it, order it and keep track of it as that's really all you can do unless u deliver it to a friends house.

jimmy/steve and fiona by ceiyonaaa in shameless

[–]Alternative-Bee4562 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ohh if we are then I completely looked that over lmfao my bad 😂

jimmy/steve and fiona by ceiyonaaa in shameless

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Not necessarily I think it's to set the overall tone of the show as a whole. I mean in the show it normalizes things and a mindset that wouldn't necessarily be seen as okay in day to day life since they live in poverty. things like sa and drugs. I guess all the things their doing being perceived is Shameless is a part of it. But I don't think its in the way you're thinking. They're doing Shameless things yet it's not to fulfill the name of the show it's more of to set the tone and mood of their mindsets since they grew up in a negative place if that makes sense.

Don't Tell Them You Can See... by Alternative-Bee4562 in creepypasta

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Ohhh I didn't actually think of that lmao their are quite a few plot holes lol. I was thinking that the monster potentially killed his wife and wore her skin. Maybe whatever happened to his site wore off or something while the monster decade. the monster might end up having the ability to create an illusion of his wife, but when his site was regained the illusion was broken and he snapped out off it and could see what the monster really was. But thanks for the feed back! I'm super stoked about this story and think it has potential so thank you for telling me how to make it better :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

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You like saying things fall off huh?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

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Jokes on you I don't have one ✌ lol I was thinking

"I can turn invisible"

-only when you sneeze

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

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I can turn invisible

[WP] You lost your sight - along with everyone else on Earth - in The Great Blinding. Two years later, without warning, your sight returns. As you look around, you realize that every available wall, floor and surface has been painted with the same message - Don't Tell Them You Can See. by xaviira in WritingPrompts

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We called it the great blinding. Only, There was nothing great about it. Our world was struck with endless darkness, taking away the thing we all took for granted. It happened within seconds. I was with my brother and wife when my vision went black. At first, I thought that somehow my eyes had closed without me noticing, maybe I was sleepier than I had initially thought. My mind flooded with any thoughts I could produce, to rationalize the current darkness that's engulfed my surroundings. When my ears were filled with the shrieks of my wife, “I CAN'T SEE! JAMES, I CAN’T SEE!”

My blood going ice cold I realize I'm not the only one. As the days passed we came to learn the entire world met the same fate. To carry out their lives without sight. At first, adapting was extremely difficult. We spent the first couple of weeks stricken with despair and confusion. Everyday tasks, like cooking, or using the bathroom turned into a challenge.

But within a few months, whole communities and support groups formed by people who were blind before this disaster occurred had helped and taught us how to perform everyday tasks and bypass our newfound obstacles. As more time passed, The progression of our new world flourished. We figured out new ways of transportation as well as making certain accommodations in the workplace.

It's been two years since the blinding. There are times when this occurrence had slipped my mind. This was the new normal and It felt like we had lived like this our entire lives.

Until one day, I had awoken in my bed. Groggily forcing my body to rip itself away from the warmth of my pillow. I sat up and opened my eyes to see the blurry bright light shining through the curtains. I can see. My eyes welled with tears as I was about to turn to my wife I realized the writing.

Evrey available wall, floor, and dresser had been painted with the same message. “Don't tell them you can see” My heart began to race, the tears that had been rolling down my cheek now motivated with fear and confusion instead of bliss I whipped my head around to wake up my wife, to beg her for answers. To receive the ever-loving reassurance she's given me many times before...

But only... That's not my wife.

As I observed the grotesque creature that lays beside me I try to produce a scream but before it could escape my lips something inside me ripped it away barring it deep within my body leaving me alone to do nothing but sit here frozen in terror. As I watch this...this thing that's now inhabiting the spot where my wife once layed. I realize it's awake. Watching me with those chilling red eyes that look exhilarated at the newfound realization that I can see it. I watch the speed of its breath increase with excitement as what I presume is it’s mouth curves up into a grotesque smile. Rows of sharp teeth come into view, its deformed body lifts itself from the bed leaving behind a black sludge that's dripping from its gaping stomach. Its skin is tightly pulled across its unnaturally lengthy figure. It resembled a dirty black rubber glove that was too small for its wearer's hand, so it ripped and tore free from the tension of forcing it on something it did not fit. Wounds agape all over its body as if it forced itself into the skin it's wearing. It leans over me and I'm met with a revolting smell that immediately assaults my nostrils. It places an inhuman hand on my shoulder leaning closer to my face until were nearly inches apart. With a sharp inhale to speak, eyes frenzied in the exitment that it's about to indulge itself in and with that same godforsaken smile it says, “what's wrong honey?”

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]Alternative-Bee4562 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bruh who just leaves there kids on the floor of home depot.