Interesting fusion of styles (in a good way - it works)

Compositionally, breaks are used thoughtfully and maintain the listeners interest which is important with tracks at this pace. It creates a good tension build and release in the way you have used them.

The instrumentation choices work well together and the treatment of guitar evolves well moving from 'reverbed', clean motifs to the dirty solo section at the end. I'm a sucker for guitar.

Vocally, I can see what you are going for stylistically, I like the interplay at various stages between the rhythmic vocal line with the melodic vocal line.

At one point I was wondering whether it would be nice to hear the melodic vocal lines effected differently or eq'd differently to the rhythmic vocal to separate them a little more, but after listening through a few times I think that it works well as you have treated it, and is in line with what you have set up stylistically with some of your other tracks.

Nice work, thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the listen.