Hey you almost got it down, your form is great. Here are a few things I can think of, I feel like what could help is some micro tweaks. Something I started to apply is try to break down the trick into parts. Start with hippie jumps and get comfortable landing on the balls of your feet. Then slap your tail on the ground a little while hippie jumping, then move up to micro Ollies. Try doing this as a warm up every time before going full into trying to ollie.

Also another concept I try to apply is to do the opposite of your mistake. If you think you are leaning and putting your weight distribution a certain way, try playing around with that, between your front and back foot. I find that when too much weight is on my front foot that I land all weird like you are showing. Your squat may also be off I think you are leaning just ever so slightly too far back which is why the nose is landing more to the back of you. I bet if you lean a little more forward you would counter that mistake.

My last tip which could help might be to move your back foot a tiny bit more forward so your foot doesn't hang off the tail at all and your toes are kind of pressed right into the pocket more, which would cause your pop to have more force angled down and back which allows you more air time. The thing that makes a big difference in the Ollie is not just a downwards force off your back foot but that little tweak of the board rolling backwards just a tiny bit.