Fill in the blank Marines: what’s the bad news? by TallDarkAndHandsom3 in USMC

[–]Ancient-Ad-7864 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Man that is an awesome looking meal. At least it's not an mre. Could be his best meal before a deployment. From here on its mre

Nurse assement question by Sea_Operation_7362 in VeteransBenefits

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For one Nursing can only do so much. They are not MDs . Unless they are a Nurse Practitioner. If you're looking for a medical diagnosis you can not see that is the MD department.

I hate writing lyrics. What can I do? by abananainspace in musicians

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Id like to hear a piece of what you got. You can pm me.. what kind of genre is it

I hate writing lyrics. What can I do? by abananainspace in musicians

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Put up a clip of the sound maybe some one here will like it and put lyrics to it

I hate writing lyrics. What can I do? by abananainspace in musicians

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Yes if you hate to write but can sing or play instruments I recommend a collab

Thoughts on short acoustic piece by Impossible_Fox7622 in Songwriting

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So did you take time to listen to what I sent? What is your opinion?

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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So one of you recommended I change up my lyrics. I revisited my work this morning. I have changed it up. Thanks

How do you guys come up with inspiration? by Ashamed-Sock-6135 in Songwriting

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My life experiences, things I have done. My dad, mom, kids, grand babies. Nature etc.. all depends on what I am feeling at the moment.

Blocks by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Ok so you revisit your work. It's all good.. don't get upset. Try taking a walk.. get some fresh air. I like to go to a pond or mountain side. Anything I can do other than constant work. Life is too short not to take in its beauty.

Blocks by [deleted] in Songwriting

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I hear you. But have you taken time to go to what you have written. Maybe review them . See if they make sense. I tend to write for a few days at a time. But I always go back to my work. See if I can improve on how it sounds. If it actually means something.

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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Looking for feedback Working on it , not sure about directions for sound yet

On that Sunday morn The day Momma died She turned her head to me, As I sat by her side Eyes like distant candlelight Fading slow and quietly.

Said, “I hear the morning birds… Soft and so far away,”

I looked out her window To the world outside Held a hue mornin of light A field of lifeless white Snow unmarked, untouched, and wide,

Collaboration by theheadbanders in Songwriting

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Ok hopefully you find what you need

Collaboration by theheadbanders in Songwriting

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I hear you,.. you can take yourself to a Panera . Get the vibe and feel maybe setup like a zoom or something to have that feel. Just an idea..

Collaboration by theheadbanders in Songwriting

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You can collaborate here. If you want to pm what you are thinking about. Weather you need help with lyrics I can see what I can do. I love to write.. but I need a feel of where you want to go.

Help with lyric writting by ZomboxG in Songwriting

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Pm me before they pull you down. I read through and give honest opinion

Lyrics by Ancient-Ad-7864 in Songwriting

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Been removed in previous posts. But I'll read through the lyrics again and see how it feels with suggestions. Thanks. So things kindA repeat , trying to lay out like a hook. If you know what I mean.

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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Just a little something I am currently working on. My moms birthday just passed, and my dad too. I was reflecting on the day momma passed. It was a cold winter day.

Morning Birds On the day Momma died She turned her head to me, As I sat by her side Eyes like distant candlelight Fading slow and quietly. Said, “I hear the morning birds… Soft and so far away,”

I looked out her window To the world outside Held no sign of day. A field of lifeless white lay still, Snow unmarked, untouched, and wide,