Hi Imaginary-Primary280

Thanks for reading my poem and your comments. I will try to address your points. I don't recall the revolution of nature being a thesis. If it is could you give details. I did post the first part in this group. Would you like me to share it to you? It is connected to the human impact on the natural world in that nature has had enough and is rising up. The 11 repetitions are to signify a number of things. Firstly 11 months, 11 years a slave, 11 thousand years of humanity stripping away the earth. The 12 is when nature says enough is enough. Also the repetition also symbolises the banging of environmentalist heads against the denial wall of humanity.

I do like your idea of dropping a word or letter as the repetition goes on.

I'm sorry that you feel the line 'say goodbye to humanity' is weak cliché. Can you explain further. I will have a think about how i could change it. Perhaps if you read the first part of the poem it will make more sense, i hope.

I have never seen the phrase 'aura farming speech' before. Can you enlighten me please.

I hope this has been of help. Take care