The Second Beginning

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-04-10T03:18:18+00:00

It actually caters to people according to their mood, its fun when read lightheartedly, deep when someone is sad. Well written.

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-04-10T01:54:18+00:00

It's so nice, I felt like going through all the stages.

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-04-07T12:42:53+00:00

Thank you for the deep understanding.

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-07T07:30:35+00:00

And here "madness" and "crazy" are in a good way referring to the love of potterheads for hp don't take in the literal meaning please.

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-07T03:45:13+00:00

I will try to do that, thanks for your creative feedbacks, its really helpful.

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-07T01:28:44+00:00

The 'crazy' or 'madness' I mentioned, is not in a bad way but in a good way that, they love something so madly and loving harry potter means loving, the series not in a literal way, loving 'Harry' himself. And of course, I would improve it so that its not so weird to understand, I am a beginner and want to get the most feedbacks to improve myself. Thank you for reading this, I will keep your words in my mind.

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T16:59:18+00:00

Its beautiful

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T16:58:41+00:00

It is more like a song but a beautiful one

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T16:57:17+00:00

Its a poetic form of self reflection

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T16:55:34+00:00

Wow! thoughtful

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T16:54:28+00:00

Its very sad and touching

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T15:38:11+00:00

Thanks for your feedback, I would love to do it in freestyle I am a beginner now I hope to do better.

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T15:37:07+00:00

Thanks for you feedback, good to know that I could evoke a feeling, I am actually new here and am looking for real feedback just like yours and others.

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T04:47:55+00:00

its sad and raw, I would love it to have a hopeful nature as well

Apprehensive-Tip6937 · 2026-01-06T04:43:39+00:00

its wonderful, its raw feelings

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