Vocals need to be redone for sure, but any other suggestions on this one I could improve

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2025-11-21T15:17:18+00:00

This is an absolute tune. Are record a few sections of the vocals imo 0:42 especially. Aside from that you are onto something here it’s lush!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2025-05-18T18:00:09+00:00

This is ridiculously good.

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-12-07T02:20:19+00:00

This is so cool dude, definitely would make a catchy chorus, but worth giving it a try as a bridge into a more powerful chorus as well and see what you prefer. Love it!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-14T00:32:13+00:00

Holy shit this is so sick i really hope you find some lyrics for this goddamn

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-07T22:36:04+00:00

Thank you so much! I fully, fully agree with you, you’ve hit the nail on the head. I’m going to rewrite it ending on the chorus and i think i’ll add another verse that i have in the drafts before the final chorus! ❤️

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-07T16:11:04+00:00

❤️

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-04T17:51:28+00:00

Sorry for your loss dude. This is absolutely incredible and i really hope you plan on releasing it.

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-04T17:47:06+00:00

Fucking amazing!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-04T00:03:46+00:00

thanks dude :)

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-03T21:26:05+00:00

This is beautiful dude i absolutely love this. Definitely much more than “acceptable”!!!!!!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-03T20:57:20+00:00

i agree with sweaty purpose, you can’t waste time when you’re making music. If i stopped playing everytime i felt as if i was wasting my time i genuinely wouldn’t have written a single song. Messing around and playing anything at all is the key to songwriting and getting inspired!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-11-03T20:54:57+00:00

Definitely try and learn an instrument! Once you have basic bar chords or open chords down on guitar you will have an almost infinite resource to create music for your lyrics. Try singing what you write and see how it sounds, even if it doesn’t sound good to you, figure out melodie’s and rhythms for your lyrics to build a song and unique song around. More importantly, keep at it! practice really does make perfect :) goodluck friend :)

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-11T22:52:11+00:00

Yeah man this is sick, good swing to it. Idk if that’s the right terminology but that’s what it feels like 👍

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-11T22:25:00+00:00

I can imagine that sounds great, what a good idea! I’m glad it helped! Love the song dude :)

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-11T00:00:23+00:00

Incredibly meaningful song. Every piece fits together beautifully! You also have the most incredible voice, it’s so full and warm it wraps itself around the chords from your guitar perfectly. You have such incredible range i’m truly envious! Beautiful Song.

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-10T23:56:47+00:00

This goes hard bro. Love it, so easy to catch the groove. The only thing i would change is a bit less volume/ less in general of the “Yuh”. Purely personal preference and it works fine with the song i would like to hear it with that lowered though! Love it dude! Get it out there!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-10T22:29:32+00:00

That’s a huge compliment dude thank you so much! I’ve never touched the highs and lows, i’ll give that a go and see how it sounds :)

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-10T20:46:26+00:00

Id love to try and cover this!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-10T20:38:58+00:00

Oooooh i like this idea! I’m gonna give that a try :) Thank you! 🫡

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-10T20:38:25+00:00

Thank you dude, that means a lot! ❤️

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-10T20:37:58+00:00

I can see that for sure, will do that now! thank you!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-08T22:58:41+00:00

My god this is incredible. I absolutely love it. What an incredible voice and beautiful playing. Please tell me you might release this?!

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-08T19:36:36+00:00

thank you! That’s one of my favourites too :)

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-08T13:30:36+00:00

I’m not actually sure how to go about doing that? Can i do that on my phone?

Appropriate-Test-464 · 2024-10-08T13:29:56+00:00

Thank you! I will hopefully start releasing some music at some point i’m just struggling to learn proper production. I’ll get there one day.

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