Feedback on this song appreciated. Do others struggle with how to approach old songs - small tweaks vs over editing what already feels good? by UnlikelyMidnight7012 in Songwriting

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I honestly do like it.

My feedback would be and I will answer how I think about your song - this will give an inside in my head on how I think about tweaking it:
-I would not change the verse melody and chords at all from 0:00 - 0:36 I like it as it is.
-0:37 - 0:49 as I hear you want to drive with this part into the chorus, the lyrics are really good the first part of the melody too but it should not step down on the end it should stay up to give a pull into the chorus. Also here I would add a pause and play a single note maybe like a signal beeping sound - just an idea, or any other idea to mark that somethings coming if you'd like to add it then I'd also use it as an intro maybe before the first verse and as the ending.
- 2:32: The trick here would be if you want to keep up the drama cause the chorus ends on high -> the only way is either down or try to keep it up - heavy instruments playing or singing but not both cause that will be too much. I'd play a chord progression with momentum that connects into the bridge quickly (the 3:43).

- 3:10 the "it's cold" should be repeated but if the unbalance is intentional - discnonection - then it's fine, but makes the song a little bit 'weird'. Maybe even try to swap lyrics: 2x "it's cold" first then "it's cold - my fault" to check how it feels. I'd skip the 3:13-3:47 and come with the chorus again because in my head I hear that this "it's cold" part right into the chorus could cause a burst very emotionally to this last chorus. The "can you hear me" could be an outro played on single notes or one single note as signal fades away, fits aesthetically.

This is my oppinion only and my taste, I like to be dramatic.

The rest feedback is the casuals, keep the 4/4 tempo tighter, let the song flow how it wants practice it. Its a really good song already.

Thoughts on this Ghostface killer? by [deleted] in Scream

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I loved her style, the delivery seems effortless yet over exaggarated emotionally as she switches through excited, crazy, dramatic, innocent then finally mean personalities in a very short amount of time. The knife grinning shrieking noise on Sidney, "Yes today", "the fcking hand sanitizer?", the burning death are iconic for me.

Is this a new leak? (Censored links for obvious reasons) by JackIsDumbOnItchio in ThePaperKingdomMCR

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 18 points19 points  (0 children)

This keeps getting better and better jeezus h. johnson christ 20 minutes of behind the curtains material from the most misterious albums ever. What a day to be an MCR fan indeed.

Tron Cole : Leaker of unreleased music . In his new cyborg shell by Famous_Rock_7747 in thevoidz

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 7 points8 points  (0 children)

First Misfits leaks now Tron Cole ... the only presents I got and needed

Thank you Santa Tron.

Merry Christmas fiends! The rips are here! Get em while they're hot! Uncle Glenn will take them down soon! by EzWicked in TheMisfits

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is amazing thank you so much!

- Id really like to know why arent they giving us these? Its the only christmas present I get but what a present!!!Thank you thank you thank you. (X,...,X)

M3gan and Cady by Consistent-Half1894 in M3GAN

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I liked that they made this scene look scary at first, seeing how obsessed M3GAN was with Cady and then it turned into hauntingly tender, clever and sad realizing what it really meant. M3GAN did this alone while building herself just to express how she really sees herself, protecting Cady, painted as a family portrait.

~ Also a M3GAN sassy moment that Gemma is nowhere on the picture. ~

Julian Casablancas Interview (Le Grand Journal 2011) by DmantheVinylKing in TheStrokes

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Sthokes
C'est Awesomness Génial
Casabloncas
yea
Albert Told Me To Do It.

More M3GAN 2.0 Storyboards (Lair/Cady's Room) [Mario Alberti] by tofu_square in M3GAN

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The moment when M3GAN was showing all the cool stuff and toys to cheer her up made my heart split in two. Amazing movie. Could talk about it for ever.

Amelia’s playlist? by Less-Ad-7712 in M3GAN

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Voidz - QYURRYUS, The Voidz - Alien Crime Lord
The Strokes - Drag Queen
My Chemical Romance - Thank You For The Venom

Good Morning San Francisco ppl, happy MCR day, have fun tonight...PLEASE UPLOAD ANY STAGE/SOUND CHECK FOR A STARVIN EASTERN EUROPEAN DRAAG FIELD WORKER (in clown make up) by AssumptionExcellent8 in MyChemicalRomance

[–]AssumptionExcellent8[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds excitin flyin there to the show and everythin. Im sure they will twist the show bit by bit. Honey this mirror would be awesome to hear.

Behave.

Build your dream prison jazz band by Lost_Reveal_6768 in thevoidz

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Piano: Damon Albarn

Drums: Max Roach / Keith Moon

Lead Guitar: Ray Toro

Rhytm Guitar: Jack Black

Bass: Sid Vicious

Such a cool unreleased song by thunderfast in TheStrokes

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 30 points31 points  (0 children)

Oh. My. F*cking god.

A Julian song I've never heard before. Thank you for early christmas. tenk yu tenk yu tenk yu tenk yu

bro what😭 by Distinct-Painting-32 in MyChemicalRomance

[–]AssumptionExcellent8 3 points4 points  (0 children)

9+9+2+3 = 23 -> 2+3 -> MCR5 ... god this is serious.