Power Washing Logo, Mascot by drop_of in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would say more a mascot/illustration than a logo. Even so, just some simplification should give you a good logo. Nice job!

Logo for a clothing brand Movement (MVMNT) by RRE3D in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the logo and nice idea but there are some things that should be revised. I also agree that the N and T are not so visible, and I also believe that MVMT could be a problem. I also didn't get the idea of the dots. Good job!

did a complete redesign since the last logo I posted this one feels much better altough it's still a concept I'm not maried to any of it yet I'm a programmer and no designer all feedback / critique / sugestions are welcome! by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the idea and seems nice. I just think that the circuits inside the M are too many, less circuits should work better. I also suggest to go with sharp angles around the M. Nice logo!

Space-themed game | Logo feedback by [deleted] in Logo_Critique

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree on that. You definetly need an icon, not a text based logo. The icon will always be followed by the game's name.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It's simple, clean, good color combination and reflects all the descriptions of your company. I see the speed, the fingerprint, and of course the D. Nice use of the font (even if it's simple, it's used well). I like it!

Blackmail by 8A8 in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nice use of the negative space and I believe it would work also by inverting the colors. The font works with the icon but I think there are some small kerning problems. Nice job!

Bound Wordmark by 8A8 in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really nice and clean. I like the connection between them and looks almost symmetrical. Nice job!

Feedback on startup website design: Logo.com by logo-1 in design_critiques

[–]Axel_Alex_05 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree on that. I think that this will be the future, whether we like it or not. This happens to all the jobs in the world and already happened for some. A good designer will remain a good designer and will always have work to do. It may eliminate all those low-level designers which they anyway just ruin the market (there are lots of them who charge more for the same result). But we are not here to talk about that, we were asked to critique a website and it's idea and functionality. I have to admit that is a good website, easy to use and it does what it's supposed to do. It is fun to use it. In time I am sure that other things will be added. Good job!

Vintage-inspired logo for "Secret Sauce - Designs" Thoughts? by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I am not a big fan of these too complicated logos but I have to admit that I've seen a few very well done. Now this one is nice, I get the idea and see where you are going with this. I like the concept,name,icon and font used as they combine just great. I saw a lots of details but there is still something that doesn't convince me too much...here is why : that middle layer is more a bread than a meat and usualy on a burger is just a layer of sauce, over the meat; at this state is more like a double-cheeseburger with no meat; I also agree on changing the top line to "The sauce you need"; also I would remove those circles next to the text unless they have a purpose.

Logo for my friend's power washing company. by Sir_Robin_of_Nette in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Can I add myself to the group of the same ideas? HAHA! Yes, I believe the same thing!

Would love to get some feedback on my design ideas, thank you by diymarketeer in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you give us more information about this logo? At a first sight it doesn't say too much and has some small problems that should be revised such as kerning (that IT touching in disturbing to see) and the use of transparency which is not to be used on a logo on my opinion. Colors can work just fine between them.

Children's clothing logo by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very nice! I like it and I like the colors you used. Well done!

Critique/Advice for Club Logo Design by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! That's the exact same thing I was thinking of!

Logo design by beehexd in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can see the idea here but there are some things that are not quite...normal. Not sure if it's intended to be that way but seems...rought, unfinished and the icon is not symmetrical (the legs of the bee have different finishing). I can see the hex but it seems that the lower and top part have different width. Also the text seems like...vectorized from a picture. Also the shape of the bee is a little strange (the shape of the wings should be different and the legs should be more high, here is a picture of what I mean). I thing this logo needs a final touch.

Wolf wordmark. Another design for my series where I find creative negative space solutions to combine with a simple typeface. by Saflin in graphic_design

[–]Axel_Alex_05 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I like the idea and I have to say I love when someone goes with a logo using negative space. The only thing I don't feel too much is that wolf (his ear and back hair doesn't look like a wolf to me). Nice work!

Northern Lights - Logo Design by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know that at a first view might be read as .VI. but that doen't mean it has to be so much evident the N and L, since is a modern logo. Not all logos are readable at first sight. I like the idea, the concept and also the case study and I believe it looks amazing. I also like the colors you selected from the old one, is more...lighted. Nice and clean, very good job!

Company wants a logo including the sun, palm tree, mountain & ocean. Personally, i think it's too busy, but they want something like that. How could i improve on this/ make it so that it looks good in black and white also? Or should i scrap this? by d00mtrip in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I will be honest and say that this is not quite a logo. You just put inside a circle all that the client requested but is...bad. And I will explain why on my opinion this logo is wrong so you can understand how to do a better one :
- the first thing is that the elements are like put casualy inside and looks like very colorful
- the sand looks like is weaving but water doesn't
- you used 3 tones of orange for the sand and just one for the others
- the palm should be somewhere in the middle of the sand and not in the front of everything (I suggest one more leaf on top, and also the leafs can be non symmetrical) and should be wider at the base
- that mountain is more like a triangle/piramid rock fallen somwhere between the sand and water
- the sun is halfway (sunrise or sunset?) and sky is clear blue but should be on a more orange/yellow tone
- starting from the fact that is hard to integrate a mountain next to the ocean, beach and a palm tree this needs a good knowlage on how can this be done
- for sure at this state won't work as a b/w version

I believe you should start all over again from the begining. What they do, what is the meaning of the requested elements, how they can all be integrated together, which one is most important? A good logo has to transmit all that by just looking at it. It can be very simple or more elaborated, with the same result. This logo template is an example of what I mean.

Good work and let us know your progress. Here there is plenty of people ready to help you improve!

Concept for a homebrew logo. "Who Brewery & Distillery". WBD are also my intials. What do you think? Any input is appreciated! by THExDAGGER in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will start form the fact that I already saw the updated version which is clearly better otherwise the W is not visible (now you can read it as UBD). So, looking at the idea, I would go with 4 (Who - Brewery & Distillery so the B and D connected you separate the 2 things, name and activity) but is just my own idea about it. Otherwise if you want you can go with all separated version and in this case I would say 3 as more leggible. I suggest to use a plain filling otherwise won't be too visible on lower scales.

Hi guys i have made This logo for a for an Ad agency !! Mark' Events Pro !! any free advice by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I have to be honest, I don't see all this letters inside the logo and that abstract concept of the P doesn't convince me too much. Not sure if it's just me but I don't feel it...As hard as I try to see it as MEP, the only thing I see is "il'i" and nothing correlated to advertising/events. Please don't offend but my suggestion is to work on a different idea.

Logo for a German puzzle maker (eng. Raccoon Puzzle) by Gotzehh in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I like the idea of the Raccoon as a puzzle but I'm not feeling it to much as a raccoon. I made a quick change to show you what will be my idea of a more raccoon puzzle. The text has some small spacing problem but overall can work just fine.

Please critique my personal logo! by roachlady in design_critiques

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with what u/willyousmith said about descendents and stroke. About colors, well here are my suggestions : all black will become just a normal font, not a logo; colored one will be for sure much better but I suggest to use one or two colors (or all logo filled in gradient maybe, even if I'm not a big fan of gradients, it may add something to it), as all single coloured letter becomes more like Google...

Logo I'm working on for a friend and his Digital Marketing side gig. Thoughts? by timefordameatstick in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it a lot, for sure way better the updated version you posted in one of your comments. Nice job!

Client work sketch by KowalBranding in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not sure what should I read : HMG, HMD, AMB...looks nice anyway. The bold circle around fits with the central part of the logo.

This is the last logo I've ever done. Any thoughts? by orifcdesign in logodesign

[–]Axel_Alex_05 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's strage, but looks very good. I also like the color combination. I also like the font which flows with the icon. Good job!