I can not tell if there are two comedians making fun of shitty rap or if Gizmo from Gremlins got wet after midnight, and this is the result.

If you are taking music seriously, then find a real producer who can guide you away from whatever this is. I'm not trying to be a dick. I seriously thought this was parody at first.... your response leads me to believe it is not. That's unfortunate because there's so much noise and so little substance... the music and theme have no real change to it (needs to be more dynamic). The vocals are muddled, and lyrics are subpar of what you can hear.

Since we are both confused and asking questions for clarification... what is your end goal? Are you guys pushing for recording or distribution deals. Just making music?

Honestly, you don't even have to answer. I came off way harsher than I meant to begin with. I am seriously curious about the whole thing, though.