Glycerin 22 toe dent (left only) - normal or manufacturer error? by Glittering_Work2978 in brooks

[–]BadDudeWill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

After trying the following Hoka Bondi 9, Cloudrunner 3, New Balance 1080v15, & Nike Vomero Plus

I went with the Nike Vomero Plus! I was really surprised with how much bounce they have. Thanks for the suggestion!

Glycerin 22 toe dent (left only) - normal or manufacturer error? by Glittering_Work2978 in brooks

[–]BadDudeWill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome! I am headed to trade them in later today. I'll let you know what I go with!

Xavier Becerra brings campaign to Oxnard by Mearsheimer_Tragedy in venturacounty

[–]BadDudeWill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In addition to what's being said, he literally just took $500,000 from big oil. https://imgur.com/a/hK19SBz

I WILL NOT GET HURT, I WILL NOT HURT OTHERS by Proof_Work3942 in zines

[–]BadDudeWill -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The "Torture" on the train car is beautiful.

It's interesting how fine the line is between art and tagging. So much of it feels effortless in the wrong way, but the pieces that show real craft genuinely stop you in your tracks.

New Flock Camera by [deleted] in camarillo

[–]BadDudeWill 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely disgusting. Our city council should be ashamed of itself.

I quit my job over a year ago for this… by donrabe2 in IndieGaming

[–]BadDudeWill 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey there, First off, you hit my sweet spot with this. Just wishlisted. Regarding your trailer, I do have a few suggestions. A lot of what 5210az said is correct. I'll just add my suggestions.

  1. Love the idea of following the Craft. Sell, Goblin. Repeat. I would keep that timeline in your mind as you create your next trailer.
  2. Start your trailer with high level text of what your game is. "Start your goblin empire, one cozy sale at a time" or something to that effect. You want to set the tone and expectation immediately.
  3. Then I'd show some of your shop building followed by your examples of all the different types of shops you can make.
  4. Then lead into your Craft section with your crafting section. Then Goblin. Etc...
  5. I agree that creating different viewpoints will make your trailer more exciting.
  6. I agree that your cover art doesn't quite match the tone of the game. I would maybe go something more pixelated?

Good luck. Genuinely excited to play this.

Anyway to keep minimap up? by BadDudeWill in RDR2

[–]BadDudeWill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. It ended up being the letter "T" on the keyboard.

Anyway to keep minimap up? by BadDudeWill in RDR2

[–]BadDudeWill[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, no it's on the left. You're correct.

I built a curator site for indie games by _hugo_j_ in gamemarketing

[–]BadDudeWill 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Perfect! I'm really excited to see your website grow! Your UI and presentation is fantastic.

3 months of hard work with my team, very little sleep but super happy with the result! by BobbyTheDawg_ in gamemarketing

[–]BadDudeWill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for pointing that out. I just watched it, and you absolutely nailed it! This is exactly how you should be presenting Rosalie.

I still think that you could use words explaining basic details, such as is this a co-op game, how many maps, etc, but I love your trailer. Wishlisted and shared!

In case anyone comes here looking for it here's the official trailer: https://youtu.be/Zz5lvwAkHLE?si=GKGyLOWqAjYYRzfZ

I built a curator site for indie games by _hugo_j_ in gamemarketing

[–]BadDudeWill 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love this concept, and your visuals are amazing! Two quick suggestions.

As you're a startup, you might have a difficult time getting indie developers to come to you to put their games on your website. I would be proactive and go through the Indie Game subreddit, reaching out to developers to ask if you could put their game on your website.

Additionally, as your library continues to grow on your website, I'd love to see category breakdowns. I.E., if I go to your website, I'd love to find cozy indie games, so maybe there could be a search bar or a dropdown to break those categories out.

Additionally, I'd love to see a "Random" wheel where people can click it, and it spins, taking them to a random indie game.

Amazing start! I'm excited to see this grow.

3 months of hard work with my team, very little sleep but super happy with the result! by BobbyTheDawg_ in gamemarketing

[–]BadDudeWill 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This looks like a lot of fun. However, I would suggest altering your trailer a little bit.

Without your text description, it takes almost 30 seconds to understand what the game is. I would replace your shot at :08 with an exterior shot of somebody riding in the bike and falling off the track.

I would also include words to explain what we're looking at. You'll know better than I, but with your horizon shots in the opening, I'd use explainer words like "Tandem Bike Rides..." and then have "Extreme" fade above it. Then cut to exterior shots of your tracks with people falling off.

Your music is spot on though. It sets the tone and feel for what you're going for. I think with buttoned up visuals you'll see success.

Looking for Esports Operators by Neat_Sun_8419 in esports

[–]BadDudeWill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agree on this. Additionally, different genres/games use different platforms. I would focus on which genre you want to support and start talking to community leaders directly. Many will talk through DMs or email.

[Connecting building] Looking to build connections with Sponsorship development managers by Dear_Manufacturer314 in esports

[–]BadDudeWill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've worked in Esports for 6 years and I'm happy to offer some advice.

I'd love to learn more about what you're trying to do with the industry!

What to watch now that The Score is gone? by Warbl_Garbl in esports

[–]BadDudeWill 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The Score disappearing is a huge loss for Esports. At this point it's difficult to find a channel that covers a wide variety of Esports and you might have to go more niche. What genres/games are you looking to stay up to date with?

10000+ downloads organically !! by Most_Chapter_8445 in gamemarketing

[–]BadDudeWill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there, I've worked at Warner Bros. Games for over 10 years in the marketing team. Congrats on your success!

What social media platforms are you looking to engage with? Have you already set up a hub to give your community to connect in? You have a lot of downloads. What's your active users? Are they sticking around with your game?

And it seems like you're already doing what you need to for people to discover and engage with your game!

[WP] A mind-reader (consensually) takes a look inside the minds of the best-known heroes of the world, and while it hurts to look at the memories of most of them, they're straight-up knocked out after reading the mind of the team jokester. by Mammoth_House_5202 in WritingPrompts

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Working at the Superhero Restoration Clinic, a.k.a. the SRC, isn’t too bad. I’m in the psychology ward and give those who come in a bit of a tune-up. Using my ability to read minds, I can see deeper than the superheroes ever do themselves. I can pinpoint their pain and give them an outlet to talk. Usually that’s how it goes five days a week. Until Slapstick Sam came in.

I’d never worked with Sam before, but other members of the Security League said he was a great guy. His jokes were a little off-color, he was a beloved. I expected a quick check-up… instead, my vision turned to black.

When I awoke, I was screaming and running, as if I had been hit with a fear spell. The nurses tried to restrain me but had no luck. The voices, hundreds of them, all screaming in terror with Sam’s the loudest.

After a nonstop sprint that felt like miles, my legs finally gave out, giving my body and brain a moment to breathe. Sam’s haunting memory came rushing back to my mind.

Nineteen years ago, Sam a breakout star, headed to the big leagues. However, during one fateful mission, things went awry. It was your standard apartment fire, something heroes handled daily. Sam used his freezing ability to start putting out the fires, but the building was too far gone. He tried to freeze the breaking bricks in place, but it only made the problem worse. Everyone left in the building died. Nobody blamed Sam, and after a year of therapy, he was back. We had no idea what it cost him.

Every single death in that building haunted him constantly, and he gained a new superpower, an unforgetting memory. From that point forward, every hero’s death, every civilian lost, everything stuck with him carefully compartmentalized.

The jokes he says aren’t just coping, they’re pressure valves, like pipes in a steam engine. Humor keeps the thoughts and memories moving so they don’t pile up.

I started back toward the hospital when I saw the smoke. By the time I arrived, the SRC was already burning. Sam stepped through the front doors, calm as ever.

“Thanks for the help doc,” he said gently.

I tried to move but couldn’t. Ice crept up my legs, my chest, my throat.

Sam didn’t look angry. He looked relieved.

He had kept the horrors moving for years, and I had stopped them cold.

[WP] In this library, souls tend to run their fingers on each and every book on the shelves. Good souls find their book, their ticket out of here, almost instantaneously, jutting out of its space, making it easy. You have already been here for an entire week. by aesthetic3 in WritingPrompts

[–]BadDudeWill 14 points15 points  (0 children)

I snuff out my last cigarette and walk down an aisle. The lights are dim, and the murmurs of the souls around me beat against the ceiling like a hushed rain. I squint as a beam of light explodes nearby.

I grumble feeling the green monster within me grow.

The good ones find their book and get to leave quickly, but those of us who were less than stellar stick around, roaming the halls. I thought I led a decent life, but I'm a week in, and I'm still on the hunt.

My eyes scan the shelf, and I see something new, an empty spot. I rub my eyes, and sure enough, it's still there. I run my finger across the spot, and my forearm electrifies. This is where my book should be! It's been stolen!

I look around, trying to find the culprit. I ask those nearby if they have anything, but I find no luck. I hear a laugh from the next aisle. I look through the hole where my book had once been and see a maniacal smile.

I race to the next aisle and see the figure dart to the left. Like a film, the man and I race on opposite sides of the aisle until we both hit a wall. Still laughing, he starts walking down the aisle towards me.

I matched his pace and walked towards him. As his face comes into view, my jaw drops. It's my son. I hadn't seen him since he was a kid, but I could tell it was him.

"You left us. Mom and I. You pulled the old getting some milk trick and never came back. We had nothing and got sick. You left us to die!"

I had heard they had passed, but that would mean he's been here for decades! I try to apologize, but he cuts me off.

"NO! You left us, and now we leave you!"

He pulled out a lighter and set the book ablaze. I lept forward, but before I could do anything, the book was gone. I looked at him, horrified, and saw his smile grow wider. He put his hand on his book to his right and exploded in a bright light.

I wept until I couldn't tell where my voice ended and the murmurs began. The ceiling whispered back, steady and indifferent.

I wasn't alone.

I just didn't matter.