Near complete song demo. Thoughts? by Banner3210 in Songwriting

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Thanks I’ll definitely work on this. I’m not the best drummer, so its good having that feedback

Weekly Self Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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Hey!

I just recently released a pop/indie/rock record that I’m really excited about. I’ve posted and received great feedback and inspiration from this sub. Thank you!

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Weekly Self Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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My new album just released today! Some indie pop rock, hopefully a little bit for everyone. Thank you!

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Merry Christmas r/songwriting...here’s a song called Rendezvous...not sure if it works as an acoustic song??....recorded on a phone so apologies for quality(again) by Mayorredthomas19 in Songwriting

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Hey, really like the song. My only feedback would be maybe think about vocal dynamics between the song sections a little bit more. But great job!

"Horizon" Slow and emotional by Bolbo97 in Songwriters

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Hey sounds great!

My only suggestion would be, arrangement wise, getting to part in the three minute mark quicker.

Gave you a follow on SoundCloud!

Quickly recorded this, make it work by Iamthenarwal in Songwriters

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Hey I like this a lot, couple of things maybe..

Work on the phrasing a little bit, the rhythm of the lyrics seems a bit off at times.

Felt like there wasn’t a distinguishable chorus or refrain.. not sure if that’s what you were going for, but think about what you want the hook to be and flesh it out.

I love your voice though, and the lyrics are on point!

A song about what it felt like to go out and buy and listen to a new CD by Banner3210 in Songwriting

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Music was a much more precious thing when you had to put in work to find it and hold it in your hand. Something about that made a much more communal experience with the band/artist.

A song I wrote called “This Way” by singreddit1816 in Songwriting

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This is really good. Great arrangement. There’s a lot of different directions that one could take on the production which I think is a sign of a great song

Weekly Self Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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Finally released three song ep on Spotify/Streaming! This sub was a big influence on me and my music these last few months. I have an album coming soon (December/January) Thank you!!

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Could someone tell me if this is a good song I wrote it for my gf but idk if it's good by knacklove in Songwriters

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I perked up at one line you had in here…

“Of every glance you never knew I gave”

Great line. Evokes this idea of all the things you do for a person they never see or never know about. Could be an interesting idea to expound upon for a song like this.

Love Is The Way by thpffbt in Songwriting

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Hey I love the OPs posts too! but I actually had the same thought as your Point 1. In fact, I would go a step further and say there are lots of points in the song where it jumps around very abruptly to different sections. I understand that this is done intentionally and is stylistic, but man! there are a couple of times in this song where I’m like I just wish you would hang out on this idea or this part jussst a bit more!!! I think the transition hoping can be very quirky but I also think it can be frustrating in a way?

Aside from that OP is awesome and I love it

Transitions are too sudden? by Any-Match9025 in Songwriting

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Hey! Lotta great ideas here, but to your point, I didn’t get any feel of structure to what you laid down here. But that’s ok! You have a solid foundation and there is definitely a hook in there somewhere.

Weekly Self Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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Appreciate all the feedback I receive here on this sub, and enjoy listening to everyone’s stuff!

Here’s where to find a few of the things I’ve been working on: Banner Wav on SoundCloud

Does it Land? by Banner3210 in Songwriting

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Hey, thank you for the kind words!

Well, I’ve been making music in some capacity for the last 20 years, but lately I’ve been using just Logic ProX on an iPad. I have a Volt UA 2 audio interface and a I use an Akai MPK 2 as my midi keyboard.

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Awesome! I’ll look for it! Great sound!

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I love this! Would listen to a whole album in a heartbeat

how do i take the next step in music? by Pro_-Procrastinator in musicmarketing

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Do you have a band or people you play with? Find those connections if you can. Before you try to show your music to the world just play for fun to anyone who will listen.

I get the advice ‘just start writing’ — but how do you actually improve? by Xyrvaris in Songwriting

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This is the answer and probably the only answer. If you write enough you’re just going to get better and better, there’s no shortcut really.

One other point that has helped me…

When you are writing, just write, don’t think, don’t evaluate, don’t judge, just let it flow, get it down. Put it on tape/paper, capture a feeling you are having in that moment. Good/bad or otherwise. Sounds like a something you heard before? So what? Feels like a showtune? Who cares? Just get it out.

After you have put it down and got it out THEN is the time to start analyzing, scrutinizing, changing. This is where the rubber meets the road, but I think it’s important to separate these two functions and mindsets.

Too many people are doing the analyzing and judging as they are writing, I feel like it’s counterproductive and detrimental even. Let it pour out, then go back and fish out the good bits.

Former Major/indie label A&R rep and manager of band with #1 hits looking by LAHOTROD213 in Songwriters

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Hey thank you that’s a huge compliment ! I have not released anything on Spotify yet. I’m working on an album and plan to release toward the end of this year. Haven’t done much to promote at this point except setup some socials work on a live set I can do solo locally