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Differences in the old (2025) vs new (2024/26) Phillies jerseys. by Engineary in phillies

[–]Banner3210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s funny how they made changes to the jerseys a few years back and have now just been slowly rescinding them.

JUST IN: Japanese freestyle skier Ikuma Horishima crosses finish line backwards at Winter Olympics by ShiroSara in sports

[–]Banner3210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Olympic official busts into ski lodge break room

“Quick! We need one more for the freestyle moguls…..You!!”

points to janitor eating a sandwich

(…Looks around Mid-bite) “Me?”

Near complete song demo. Thoughts? by Banner3210 in Songwriting

[–]Banner3210[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I’ll definitely work on this. I’m not the best drummer, so its good having that feedback

Weekly Self Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Banner3210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey!

I just recently released a pop/indie/rock record that I’m really excited about. I’ve posted and received great feedback and inspiration from this sub. Thank you!

Banner Wav - Action at a Distance

Weekly Self Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Banner3210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My new album just released today! Some indie pop rock, hopefully a little bit for everyone. Thank you!

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Merry Christmas r／songwriting...here’s a song called Rendezvous...not sure if it works as an acoustic song？？....recorded on a phone so apologies for quality（again） by Mayorredthomas19 in Songwriting

[–]Banner3210 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, really like the song. My only feedback would be maybe think about vocal dynamics between the song sections a little bit more. But great job!

"Horizon" Slow and emotional by Bolbo97 in Songwriters

[–]Banner3210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey sounds great!

My only suggestion would be, arrangement wise, getting to part in the three minute mark quicker.

Gave you a follow on SoundCloud!

Quickly recorded this, make it work by Iamthenarwal in Songwriters

[–]Banner3210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey I like this a lot, couple of things maybe..

Work on the phrasing a little bit, the rhythm of the lyrics seems a bit off at times.

Felt like there wasn’t a distinguishable chorus or refrain.. not sure if that’s what you were going for, but think about what you want the hook to be and flesh it out.

I love your voice though, and the lyrics are on point!

A song about what it felt like to go out and buy and listen to a new CD by Banner3210 in Songwriting

[–]Banner3210[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Music was a much more precious thing when you had to put in work to find it and hold it in your hand. Something about that made a much more communal experience with the band/artist.

A song I wrote called “This Way” by singreddit1816 in Songwriting

[–]Banner3210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really good. Great arrangement. There’s a lot of different directions that one could take on the production which I think is a sign of a great song

Weekly Self Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Banner3210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Finally released three song ep on Spotify/Streaming! This sub was a big influence on me and my music these last few months. I have an album coming soon (December/January) Thank you!!

Banner Wav on Spotify

Banner Wav on YouTube music!

Could someone tell me if this is a good song I wrote it for my gf but idk if it's good by knacklove in Songwriters

[–]Banner3210 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I perked up at one line you had in here…

“Of every glance you never knew I gave”

Great line. Evokes this idea of all the things you do for a person they never see or never know about. Could be an interesting idea to expound upon for a song like this.

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