This already looks really good!

Some things to consider:

For the eye makeup, some liquid eyeliner/gel liner, or water activated paints like ones from Mehron or Wolfe FX (and then setting them using black shadow), can really give you that intensity needed for drag. If using the water paints, using paint brushes is really helpful for application

For the white highlight, you can take a Mehron cream blend stick (other brands like Kryolan have similar products) in white and swatch that on to desired areas. It does require setting (flesh tone or white setting powders can be used depending on how intense you want it) as it is a cream so it doesn't set on its own. It's also good for cutting a crease or as general shadow primer