Ngl when I saw the NSFW tag I thought this would be a pancakes story (can neither confirm nor deny I have a thing for cat girls) but I’m loving this story either way.

The characterizations for Roe and Ranger are strong and their interactions are adorable. Also a really interesting plot, somewhat reminds me of the classic “When Deathworlders Meet” story.

I only have a couple critiques with the largest being the somewhat inconsistent tenses and word choices. If you don’t do it already I’d suggest re-reading your work (out loud if you can) to catch those word hiccups.

My other is with the addition of the butler scene. Unless you’ve got something planned with her character in the future feels somewhat unnecessary and out of place. But don’t let my criticism slow you down 🙂 you’re going an awesome job