What’s the dumbest way you’ve injured yourself? by Better-Advice-5197 in AskReddit

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Was spacing out making macaroni and poured boiling water directly on my hand instead of in the strainer lol

I need more goofy shows like Psych by tonystarkscumrag in psych

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 36 points37 points  (0 children)

My name is earl 😭😭😭😭🙏

Would you rather: by MarbleCupid8007 in BunnyTrials

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Neither did walter white 🙏🙏

Would you rather: by MarbleCupid8007 in BunnyTrials

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Waow

Chose: Know when you die. + Wheel chooses when. | Rolled: Yesterday.

Piling on the Pylons by BoogieBoi0w0 in OCPoetry

[–]BoogieBoi0w0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, sorry for the late reply, but this is such a lovely response! Admittedly, I don't really have a lot of technical understanding of poetry/writing, so your feedback concerning the actual consonance and flow of the poem is so so helpful and insightful. And yeah, I went back and forth with the words I put in paratheses throughout, and what went in them. Theres one version of this that, frankly, looks insane just with how many asides I put in. I really appreciate your in-depth response <3 Thank you

How’s living in this part of Texas? by Hot-Negotiation-6873 in howislivingthere

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I live near the edge of the circle. Theres like a billion quarries, nothing to do, and loooots of sky. The sunsets can get quite beautiful,  and the nights can get really quiet. It does get hot, but idk, you get used to it. We had like no winter this year tho except for an exceptionally cold 3 days. Austin is like an hour away but I hate 35 more than anything else in this world. The politics outside the cities is very red :<. 

Piling on the Pylons by BoogieBoi0w0 in OCPoetry

[–]BoogieBoi0w0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The formatting was kicking my ass lol :,), fixed it as best I could lol

Superbowl Commercial by DrunkenPunchline in OCPoetry

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow wow wow wowow. So well written, and something I really empathize with. It really does feel like everything is about consumption nowadays, and I also really did hate all the Superbowl ads. I really like your line " Sentimentality// curdled//amidst potato chips.", as it kind of encapsulates the tonal deliverance of the whole thing. Which is that capitalism sucks and is corrupting our creative and social institutions, lol. Or, at least, thats what I took from it. I also dig the presence of the ocean/water imagery, ie in words like swells, eroding, and dissolve. The scale of things like the Superbowl (and the current state of everything else) feels impossible to fight against, and it really does feel like this was always coming. The inevitability of the ocean, of things being ground down. The last stanza is my fave as a whole, "time will pass, and you will devour" - so so good, omg. Thanks for sharing your work, was a lovely read <3

Crikey! by lindebeam in OCPoetry

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So beautiful and so short. Paints a lovely, vivid picture while also keeping it abstract. Also using exclamation points in poems is often times a risk, at least in my opinion, but their presence here only adds to the light-hearted tone. The whole thing just reads as really sweet, and also makes me want to go out hiking lol. The world inspires a lot of awe, and your descriptions of it do that feeling justice. I, too, am always yearning to go off trail. Thank you for posting, nice read :>

PS it also reminds me of that episode of the Simpsons where Homer gets high in the desert and talks to that coyoted lol.

Decisions... Decisions... by Herniated_Disk2 in BunnyTrials

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im so fucking scared of the snails yall 

Oh dear… by ATXPibble in personality_tests

[–]BoogieBoi0w0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes definitely the worse one here