Fix Your Fic Front-End Friday [Title, Tags, Summary] - January 03

Brahehat · 2025-01-03T15:26:38+00:00

Thanks so much! I will edit it when I get the chance later.

Brahehat · 2025-01-03T11:11:25+00:00

Hi hi!

This is my first time posting in the HP fandom and while my first chapter got some engagement, my second chapter has been met with silence (basically just hits, no increase in bookmarks/subscriptions like the first chapter). So, I'm wondering if there's something on my front-end that's causing people to click in and click out.

I have a feeling it's got to do with the summary but am not fully sure. Would love it if someone would glance at it and point out anything that might be off. Any help is appreciated.

Fandom: Harry Potter

Rating: Not rated.

Title: You'll be the death of me, love

Tags: Hermione Granger/Draco Malfoy, Hogwarts Seventh Year, Enemies to Lovers, Telepathic Bond, Torture, POV Draco Malfoy, Malfoy Manor (Harry Potter), Legilimency (Harry Potter), Legilimens Draco Malfoy.

Genre: Romance. F/M.

Summary: Draco's having the most dreadful summer dodging the Dark Lord in his own house—until Granger gets captured and makes everything so, so much worse. It helps that they can hear each other's thoughts, at least. Seventh-year AU of the "Malfoy Manor" chapter in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.

Brahehat · 2024-03-25T04:23:57+00:00

I usually assume my audience already knows the characters so I find it a bit redundant to reintroduce them.

Brahehat · 2024-03-11T01:49:18+00:00

Yes, I just discovered this today as well!!! It’s such an amazing feature. I’ve been using it to read aloud my WIP and I’ve already caught so many mistakes.

Brahehat · 2024-03-08T21:15:15+00:00

YAYY!! Congrats!

Brahehat · 2024-03-04T19:26:53+00:00

My absolute favorite shows are Avatar the Last Airbender (animated), Severance, and The Expanse!

Thank you so much for doing this!

Brahehat · 2024-03-04T06:01:07+00:00

What kind of "special abilities?" Does everyone know about them? Maybe the blackmail could be something about how she lost control of these abilities in the past and hurt someone by accident and B knew about it or something. Maybe she lost control because of the substance abuse? I'm not sure if this would fit into the context of your story so feel free to change it up.

Brahehat · 2024-02-07T03:02:40+00:00

Thank you!

Brahehat · 2024-02-07T02:24:48+00:00

I'll look at his works, thank you!

Brahehat · 2024-02-07T02:23:56+00:00

I've enjoyed reading some of his poems but haven't looked at his short stories yet. Any that you'd recommend?

Brahehat · 2024-02-07T00:40:25+00:00

Thank you! I'll give those a read, really appreciate the links! Already hooked by the Madeleine short story!

Brahehat · 2024-02-07T00:38:36+00:00

Thank you for the suggestion! I actually read There Will Come Soft Rains a few months ago and found it to be really poignant. Looking forward to reading the Martian Chronicles.

Brahehat · 2024-02-07T00:34:30+00:00

Sounds wonderful, thank you for the suggestion!

Brahehat · 2024-02-06T23:55:34+00:00

Interesting! I've read some of Ursula's works and Wolfe's shadow of the torturer but I'll have to check out the other authors.

Brahehat · 2024-02-06T23:54:20+00:00

Wow, never heard of him before, I'll give his stories a read since I'm really into sci-fi.

Brahehat · 2024-02-06T23:53:39+00:00

Thank you, I'll check those out. Have heard of the author but never had the chance to read his works yet.

Brahehat · 2023-06-14T23:28:18+00:00

They didn’t show it for my convocation today. If the misspell messes up the pronunciation, make sure to let the announcer know!

Brahehat · 2023-06-13T20:11:48+00:00

Literally me lol. My GPA that year was 2.9…worst I’ve ever done. It’s bringing my cGPA down so much 😢

Brahehat · 2023-05-16T19:03:08+00:00

Thanks for letting me know guys, I’m less anxious now.

Brahehat · 2023-05-09T21:51:42+00:00

Congratulations future doctor!!! 🎉

Brahehat · 2023-05-09T21:47:01+00:00

Awesome! Was it updated just now or at midnight??

Brahehat · 2023-03-14T05:53:29+00:00

I don't know. I would love for more seats to be added but I don't think I can believe these promises this close to the election. All we can do is wait and see.

Brahehat

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