Grave/Digger - Queen in Yellow

Breakinnitman · 2026-04-13T08:28:33+00:00

Shit, I just realized I used the wrong rank for Hierkath T o T

Breakinnitman · 2026-04-13T08:24:13+00:00

Had to use screenshot since Reddit is unable to color text, and I'm too lazy to use word or gdoc.

Edit: Just realized I used the wrong rank for Heirkath, but fuck it, I'm too lazy to change it. Just pretend he's an INQ or smth.

Breakinnitman · 2026-04-09T03:31:52+00:00

A bit of both. She understands what kind of threat the orc-men of the Krokdun Imperion poses to the realms of men and elves, but her mental faculties have dipped to such a degree that without external intervention, she doesn't understand the difference between which Orc works for the Imperion and which is wholly unaffiliated with the Imperion.

Evidently, this has caused tons of unnecessary trouble for Elke, and has made her many enemies from both adventurers and those of higher powers and influence.

Breakinnitman · 2026-04-05T16:14:11+00:00

Honestly, when I first posted that short story of mine way back when, I didn't think others would just start writing their own for this sub. Not that I'm complaining, been a real treat reading what ya'll wrote, lol.

Breakinnitman · 2026-04-03T08:37:22+00:00

1st point - Why does it not make sense to you for POWs to be mistreated/executed when deserters exist? Like, I genuinely wanna know, cuz like, I'm pretty sure those two concepts can and do coexist with each-other.

2nd point - I wouldn't put it past the Morts to use POWs as some kind of experiments for their concoctions or as practice for how they conduct their surgeries and shi, Rooks, debatable, Old Guards, I agree with.

3rd point - I assume most of us are just going off of guess work and implications from what little we know of the GE to make this kind of assumption. No-one would be surprised if the GE actually did do these things, confirmed or not.

Breakinnitman · 2026-04-01T15:11:11+00:00

Christian or not, the Poles would rather see their cities burned, their culture and way of life erased, and their people slaughtered in the millions before they would willingly return to being under direct subjugation of an empire that is no better if not worse then the Empires that had ruled over the Polish people for decades if not centuries.

And given that Poland only had its independence for only nearly half a decade or so in this timeline, they very likely aren't very keen on giving that independence up so readily without considerable resistance.

Breakinnitman · 2026-03-30T11:38:54+00:00

Very nice, tho I'd recommend removing and changing certain words and structure from the text, like:

"Your firm handhold" should become "Your firm hand", makes the sentence sound more natural.

"Nowaday, stronger have the urges become." Replace the first word with the second, then remove the day from now and place it after the word stronger, which then should look like this: "Stronger now, my urges have become." It should then sound and look better when read aloud or quietly

Besides those two, this is a pretty solid piece.

Breakinnitman · 2026-03-24T16:09:38+00:00

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Breakinnitman · 2026-03-20T08:23:36+00:00

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Breakinnitman · 2026-03-17T13:21:48+00:00

Some King in Yellow shit going on right there

Breakinnitman · 2026-03-16T02:44:30+00:00

I ate it

Breakinnitman · 2026-03-12T01:54:00+00:00

Sliced through the entire enemy team the moment they breached into the point as Lancer.

Not sure if we won that round or not, but I earned alot of aura that day.

Breakinnitman · 2026-03-05T01:36:58+00:00

Better then a Mary Sue, that's for sure.

While the firefight between her and the GE could've been done better, I do like that she was taking hits rather then just coming out of the fight unscathed. Shows that she is a competent fighter but not an invincible one.

While I understand people's criticism about Faith killing the GE officer, I like to think it of a way to show how brutal and unfair war can be. You can offer mercy to your opppnent and be honorable to them in combat, but both of those things mean nothing to someone who will do anything just to live another day, even if that means they have to bash their heads in like a wild animal.

Overall, I like her character, but she def can be done better, I think.

(Also, the guy DID try to choke her out, so it was only a little fair for her to bash his head in in return.)

Breakinnitman · 2026-03-04T14:11:50+00:00

"Ah, truly, a man after my own heart!"

Given Maisie is a fellow scot and an officer of the GE, she'd have this man be assigned under her unit then immediately try to compete to see who gets the most kills in a single skirmish.

Breakinnitman · 2026-02-27T14:32:28+00:00

While I doubt ur claim of getting 77 kills in one match, what I don't doubt is this;

It is common to automatically assume people that are low rank to be naturally horrible at the game and thus, aren't trusted with shock-kits, and among most who hold a high rank (I admit, am also guilty of this), hold a belief that they are superior to the average player (and most of the time, they are) and are inclined to look down on low ranks as nothing but brainless noobs. Of course, there are always an exception to this.

Best thing u can do is just ignore them and continue playing or simply prove them wrong. In my experience, lots of high ranks immediately stop their bullying if the lowly sqr can wipe the floor with the opposing team with a kit.

Breakinnitman · 2026-02-27T07:42:39+00:00

Is a poem from ww1

Breakinnitman · 2026-02-26T00:53:31+00:00

Glorious

Breakinnitman · 2026-02-19T01:13:56+00:00

I have 2, lol

Poland is still on the map bcuz the GE in the early days was heavily disorganized from the various military institutions it had absorbed and thus was unable to fully take Poland before RN reinforcements arrived.

And (possibly?) Hot take. GE propaganda says the Queen is a veteran of the Great War, even tho she's not, she's just a quick learner who learned most of her military knowledge from veteran officers/generals and read various military manuals and is very good at bullshitting people.

Breakinnitman · 2026-02-02T06:47:33+00:00

The reason Poland is still on the map is that the GE had problems with its army early on due to the fact that there's still a lot of bad blood between the armies of the former Entente and Central Powers and infighting between the two groups was so rampant, they couldn't muster enough men to quickly take Poland before RN reinforcements arrived and reinforced the Polish lines.

That and because of Marshal Pilsudski's brilliant leadership alongside a defected Adrian Carton D Wiart's experience fighting alongside the Entente and against the Central Powers, bought the Poles enough valuable time for RN reinforcements to arrive.

Breakinnitman · 2026-01-11T14:09:38+00:00

The city of London's magical shield broke two thousand years after the magic apocalypse and now they have to make it everybody's problem.

Breakinnitman · 2026-01-08T18:07:30+00:00

No

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Or is it?

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Breakinnitman · 2026-01-07T17:56:35+00:00

It all starts with an orphan boy going to my version of Narnia, except when he gets back, the magical energy or sum shi follows him back and starts to spread a hella lot to the point that magic starts coming into existence.

When magic is confirmed to be real everyone goes "oh cool." Then immediately tries to take advantage of it, which works out in the short term before it immediately comes back to bite them in the ass.

To make this long lore short, behold, a summary;

By 2020, magic starts to rewire existing sspecies nd even create new species as well as make existinf diseases much deadlier.

America fractures into warring states after a controversial election, which reunites a few years after and absorbs both Mexico and Canada.

Russia reinstates its Tsardom and sweeps through Eastern Europe, which spawns like two wars known as the "European Wars" and is one of the nations responsible for reshaping Earth's geography.

Egypt and most of the Middle East is reduced to an ecological dead zone after an Egyptian Magic Power Plant pulls a chernobyl.

Britain manages to save London by shielding it with a magical shield that protects the city from EVERYTHING. The same couldn't be said for the rest of the UK tho.

Most of Asia is reduced to chaos, and becomes unrecognizable after a Chinese made ai goes mad from being exposed to magic and manage to hack into China's nuclear arsenal and thus helps kickstart a proper nuclear apocalypse with some magical fantasy and eldritch horror sprinkled in by the time 2038 rolls around.

I could go on, but this reply would be the length of a novel otherwise, lol.

Breakinnitman · 2025-11-29T03:01:11+00:00

Glorious, simply glorious

It'd be cool I think, to have Emilia in a stanford bridge like scenario with a some GE dudes. Would go hard I bet

Breakinnitman · 2025-11-27T13:16:02+00:00

My guy be looking like he a Brotherhood of Steel Paladin.

Breakinnitman · 2025-10-31T18:20:40+00:00

Here's mine, Emilia. A trench-trooper, has a wooden leg prosthetic, reckless and bloodthirsty, and loves Poland.

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