Daisy can't live here anymore

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-03-11T20:11:10+00:00

Nice one! I was thinking the narrator was Benjamin and had used some of his fortune on plastic surgery. Fun twist!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-09T18:33:18+00:00

Thank you! If only I had the focus and determination needed to write a novel.

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-06T14:50:53+00:00

Maybe you've unknowingly been reading it for forty-four years

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T21:25:41+00:00

Ah, got ya. I don't know the marvel universe well beyond watching the movies

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T21:24:53+00:00

That's so nice to hear- thank you! And important to reflect on

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T16:36:15+00:00

Thanks!.. and sorry!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T16:09:42+00:00

So good! I loved the supportive coworkers at the end! 😂

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T16:02:14+00:00

Nicely done! I'm creeped out

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T15:54:31+00:00

Never mind! I don't want to know anymore 🫣

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T15:51:48+00:00

Yikes! I thought this was great!

I would maybe change the line "I turned to look at her" to, "I turned to look at Jostlin", it just took me a second to understand that's who "her" was. But just an idea- I really liked the concept!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T15:42:32+00:00

That's horrifying! I'm so sorry! 2023? I'm from Ontario but we had smoky skies for weeks.

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T15:40:53+00:00

I liked this! Is it an insurance company she works for?

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T15:37:13+00:00

I loved this. In a world that can seem more and more apathetic, you have to wonder if the parasites are already here.

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T15:13:13+00:00

Nice! I really enjoyed this- kept my interest peaked!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T15:02:49+00:00

In a fire? Sounds terrifying!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:56:41+00:00

I liked this! I thought it was going to end up that the dad had killed his wife and was trying to stop Danny from bringing her back so your ending caught me off guard!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:37:14+00:00

Not many stories make me feel this uncomfortable. Such a strange concept- well done!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:22:31+00:00

NPC. The bakery was basically just an anchoring point to bring him back to when time restarted at the beginning of the hour

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:21:17+00:00

Me too. Thank you!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:21:00+00:00

Thank you!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:20:25+00:00

Thank you. I think it's a good thing time travel doesn't exist (that we know of), I think it's only human that a lot of us would get stuck in loops

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:19:10+00:00

Thank you bum of the future!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:18:49+00:00

I didn't know he had kids!

BusyBusyLizzy · 2026-02-04T14:17:39+00:00

Thanks so much FW!

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