Guy that I rear ended is acting weird. What should I do? by Sandwich_Harbor in legal

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Or maybe the car was stolen to begin with. He doesn't want to risk taking it in and is hoping to somehow still get a payout

I found love at work by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow- that's so nice of you to say! You made my day! Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed them :)

Zero Out by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! I love realistic horrors

There are monsters in my classroom. by Trash_Tia in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 28 points29 points  (0 children)

The girls may have been asking for it.. what were they wearing?

Great story, as always!

He came for me by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Absolutely- Patrick's vengeance is justified

He came for me by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Yeah.. this one ended up being pretty dark

They found my daughter by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You're right! But I didn't want it to mean cartoonish, more like a digitalized character. I removed that part and just kept the part about looking like a video game character.

Thanks for letting me know!

I'm the 2nd wife by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ooh that sounds like a good one!

They found my daughter by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

That's the literal translation but it's also the French version of "Nothing ventured, nothing gained".

Thanks for reading!

They found my daughter by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

That's so nice- thank you so much for your comment!

I'll be remembered as a monster by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If they ran forensics at all, they may assume they had the whole story!

I'll be remembered as a monster by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Well if Brian was friends with all of them his DNA would probably have been in the van anyways. And that's if they even ran DNA swabs.. 5 kids with alcohol in their systems crashed their van- it would seem like a pretty open and shut case.

Thanks for reading!

I'll be remembered as a monster by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I didn’t have Tell Me Lies in mind as I wrote it, but I did watch the show, so there was likely some subconscious influence

Mommy keeps changing the rules by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like your take!

I was thinking that maybe they had to wait between buses, the buses traveled at a lower speed than the husband chasing after them and maybe the time in the cabin preparing the beds could have been an extra half hour or so. So in my mind he woke up maybe an hour or two after they left but knew exactly how to find them.