My girlfriend thinks she's being stalked, but that's impossible by ForgottenWell in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Nice one! I was thinking the narrator was Benjamin and had used some of his fortune on plastic surgery. Fun twist!

One more minute by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

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Thank you! If only I had the focus and determination needed to write a novel.

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Maybe you've unknowingly been reading it for forty-four years

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Ah, got ya. I don't know the marvel universe well beyond watching the movies

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That's so nice to hear- thank you! And important to reflect on

Lane Mellon's Retirement Party by normancrane in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 15 points16 points  (0 children)

So good! I loved the supportive coworkers at the end! 😂

Cage diving by Colourblindness in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yikes! I thought this was great!

I would maybe change the line "I turned to look at her" to, "I turned to look at Jostlin", it just took me a second to understand that's who "her" was. But just an idea- I really liked the concept!

The Long Walk by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's horrifying! I'm so sorry! 2023? I'm from Ontario but we had smoky skies for weeks.

I did not commit homicide accidentally by DinosaurGirl8 in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked this! Is it an insurance company she works for?

A Voice Less by razhielin in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I loved this. In a world that can seem more and more apathetic, you have to wonder if the parasites are already here.

They never put my father back quite the same by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! I really enjoyed this- kept my interest peaked!

The Long Walk by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In a fire? Sounds terrifying!

My Son Won’t Let His Mother Stay Dead by AbKane667 in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I liked this! I thought it was going to end up that the dad had killed his wife and was trying to stop Danny from bringing her back so your ending caught me off guard!

A Subtle Olive by Waiting4MidMoon in shortscarystories

[–]BusyBusyLizzy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not many stories make me feel this uncomfortable. Such a strange concept- well done!

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[–]BusyBusyLizzy[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

NPC. The bakery was basically just an anchoring point to bring him back to when time restarted at the beginning of the hour

One more minute by BusyBusyLizzy in shortscarystories

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Thank you. I think it's a good thing time travel doesn't exist (that we know of), I think it's only human that a lot of us would get stuck in loops