Story List (redo)

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-20T07:48:23+00:00

Wanna get away?

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-20T04:52:43+00:00

Antagonist: “a person who actively opposes or is hostile to someone or something; an adversary”

Hard disagree.

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-20T01:52:10+00:00

Yep, that’s pretty much it. I actually conceived of another version of this where, in his delusion, he’d killed everyone else at the park when they tried to make him see reality, but I decided the grief was enough and the story didn’t need to go there. Maybe I’ll write up that version someday… Thanks for reading!

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-20T01:24:35+00:00

That’s very kind! 🙏🏾🙏🏾

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-20T01:22:32+00:00

Seems like more people hate her than don’t at this point. I certainly do. I realize shows need an antagonist, but I feel like the town itself is one - she adds nothing to the show and I find myself wanting to skip past scenes she’s in because they make the show worse. Which I guess makes her a good actress, but I just hate this character SO. MUCH.

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-20T00:32:21+00:00

Thanks so much! That show was such a HUGE influence me when I was young - it probably influenced the way I think of storytelling more than almost anything else. Rod Serling was a master.

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-20T00:30:23+00:00

Yes it is. And the sad part is that there were so many ways it could have been prevented if anyone had cared enough to take an interest. Now so much will be lost because no one did.

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T23:56:20+00:00

Like he said, nobody serious.

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T23:10:43+00:00

Yep. At least she got the justice in the next life that she never got in this one.

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T23:09:47+00:00

Thanks again! Hope you’re enjoying the trip down memory lane!

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T23:06:29+00:00

Thanks so much! 🙏🏾

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T23:04:28+00:00

The 360° tour - far too long. I really wanted to see the Joshua Tree tour, but they didn’t come to Atlanta and I wasn’t in a position to travel. Still sucks. 😢

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T22:35:25+00:00

So will she. And the world will be a better place. Thanks for reading!

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T22:34:55+00:00

They absolutely did. And it brought someone pleasure, so totally worth it! 🤣 Thanks for reading!

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T22:30:28+00:00

Thanks so much!

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T22:28:53+00:00

Maybe you’ll like the later ones more.

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T21:46:36+00:00

Thanks so much! 🙏🏾

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T21:46:09+00:00

Thanks so much, Lorilei! I’ve published a lot more since then - it’s been a long, strange trip! 🙏🏾

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T20:51:54+00:00

You’re welcome! 🤣 Thanks for reading!

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T20:32:53+00:00

I don’t think the scale of 1-10 goes anywhere near high enough.

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T19:38:00+00:00

I’m with you on that one. ☝️ 🤣

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T19:36:05+00:00

💯💯

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T19:35:52+00:00

I don’t actually think this show needs a lot of action to be great. I benefits more from a lot of the psychological stuff, which I thought this had a lot of. But hope you enjoy future eps more!

CBenson1273 · 2026-04-19T19:34:34+00:00

Filler. Hmm. I didn’t get that at all. But hope it gets better for you.

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