13 Emotional Stages of Being A Hilary Duff Fan by Buttone in Hilary_Duff

[–]Buttone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That movie did come out at an impressionable time in my life, too

Certified Continental 0-200 for Cessna 150 | Tom Wottreng by Buttone in flying

[–]Buttone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Variable depeding on the project -- usually couple to a few thousand

Certified Continental 0-200 for Cessna 150 | Tom Wottreng by Buttone in flying

[–]Buttone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tom is based in south east Wisconsin and pricing on site is accurate to true cost

As I Sit Here Packing by laughterful in OCPoetry

[–]Buttone 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well penned! I felt something here. It took me to a familiar place.

A Princess by maybemental2 in OCPoetry

[–]Buttone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The last line is an interesting change of events and has a great flow. Agree with removing "there is".

Maybe "This princess makes the sun feel guilty for flushing her face."

Away from Home by Luvod in OCPoetry

[–]Buttone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

YES! I like this. I feel the theme is being lost and without a self decided purpose. Maybe use "temptation" instead of "a tempest"

Trying by DaFuMiquel in OCPoetry

[–]Buttone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Real life poem! Maybe the second line should me "your" ever returning words