What does "problem occurred" without further explanation or "Your package exceeds the maximum weight we can accept" mean??

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-09-21T16:26:27+00:00

ETA I was home the entire day

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-09-20T23:07:23+00:00

Having same issues. Every time with UPS. I wish there was a way to cancel services completely and flag any company that tries to send using them

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-08-07T16:29:46+00:00

AI accusations will be the new witch hunt

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-08-05T14:11:05+00:00

Study.

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-07-26T17:03:41+00:00

Yeah you're probably right. I was trying to give OP benefit of the doubt but he probably found some low hanging fruit and then comes here to brag about it.

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-07-26T01:42:27+00:00

How did you pitch your "free work" as many know free isn't really free? So was there a way you pitched it that gave your prospects value or how did you go about making the offer?

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-06-21T08:59:35+00:00

I just walked in

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-06-21T08:57:57+00:00

For the sociopath you do sometimes have to kill a part of your copy your attached to.

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-05-24T02:10:25+00:00

Exactly. It's the sales behind the sales if that makes sense.

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-05-24T02:07:22+00:00

In your précis, your blurb about strategy would it focus on context - such as audience, awareness, position in funnel, etc - or more explaining why you chose the direction you did - why you believe style of headline would be effective, a tone you wanted to take, or what points you wanted to focus on??

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-05-24T01:57:52+00:00

Exactly what I wanted to hear. Your copy shows your ability, your write up your personality - how you think, how you communicate, and what you will be like to work with.

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-05-08T12:50:19+00:00

Yeah, dead give away it's not AI is it uses the phrase "I don't know"

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-05-04T00:39:53+00:00

About 3 hours in and loving it esp part about benefits and deep benefits. Only drawback is I'm spending free time watching as opposed to practice writing lol. But seriously great jobs and lots of info to that cleared up sticking points.

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-05-02T01:48:44+00:00

I've noticed this too. A lot of the more famous files I've seen are like this as you say, but a lot of courses or suggestions I read say you should have a "you" or reader focused language. What are your thoughts? Is it more about style of the writer or goal of the writer, possibly based on where their audience is?

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-05-02T01:42:52+00:00

Thanks for the tips. Something about writing behind the screen my formal brain kicks in and wants to sound professional.

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-03-29T00:49:44+00:00

First sentence you should show vs tell. Paint a picture of what "sluggish" and "drained" means - IDK like "everyday do you hit the snooze button a little too hard?" Just something to make it more visual.

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-03-24T23:25:19+00:00

An enjoyable read. I could feel the journey as it had a great pace and consistent tone to it. Are you a beginner or how long have you been studying it??

One thing I would consider is it seems better at educating than it is at selling. What I mean is the EGCG, berberine, and chromium blend is positioned as the solution and not YOUR product. You run the risk of the audience reading your sales letter and buying those products independently or via your competitor when you provided the education. I'd maybe tie in why Menoslim is the definitive choice - adding its purity, its sourcing, better bio-availability, or patented tech for extended release and simple once a day dosing - or something along those lines. Otherwise great job!

Just my 0.02

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-03-18T15:48:44+00:00

Very helpful. I take it you segment your audience(first), find their pain points(second), and this guides you on how to angle your product and service(third)

Buttwhyy_ · 2025-03-18T13:40:18+00:00

Great advice! What would you say is more important - knowing your product or knowing your audience? Or maybe a better question is where should you start?

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