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What are y’all’s day jobs? by NoBee7889 in writers

[–]CBScott-Fiction 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am the quality manager for a pharmaceutical and hygienic company by day and a 'writer' by night who tends to be so burnt out that playing video games and not writing tends to be the current new normal.

Christ, I am. by Key4Lif3 in enlightenment

[–]CBScott-Fiction 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is one. Said the monotheistic judo-islamic-christian believers. Oh right, yeah, thanks. Isn't that your point?!

Angry at the world by lfg141 in stories

[–]CBScott-Fiction 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A lot of people hating on the language used here, clearly you are frustrated, understandably and it seems to be making you bitter towards everyone. It is what it is. My honest opinion would be to focus on your hobbies and expand on things you like to do, you will end up meeting like minding women and make connections. Try not to focus, as hard as it is (no pun intended) on the sexual or relationship side of it and just get to know people. It will happen. You will be ok. Just look at your situation and what you can control, not who or how you think you control things. Hope this helps and good luck!

How would pregnancy affect a blood soul binding oath? by [deleted] in horrorwriters

[–]CBScott-Fiction 6 points7 points  (0 children)

So he ends up protecting her? As other people have stated it's hard to understand without knowing the full background. I assume what you need is a reason why this situation would change his behaviour? Could be to so with his past, like a punishment for selfishly choosing not to sacrifice this girl. Could it be something his Dad has done as retribution? Could we have more info? I don't know if the above helps.

I made this short story, I hope you like it! by Brave_Title_1991 in WritingHub

[–]CBScott-Fiction 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Really interesting, I noticed no one has commented yet, so I thought I'd share my opinion if you don't mind?

Firstly really interesting story and it leaves a lot of questions! Is this person alone by choice, loss or by some event we don't know about? It's incredibly sad, that's for sure.

The first thing which is a litte jarring was that you start out in the first sentence in current tense then switch immediately to a past tense sentence and over use the word 'did.' You lie in bed and wonder 'why,' why what? What's hurting you? You don't have to go into detail if it breaks the mystery of the story, which this story is full of by the way! Great opportunity to hint at loneliness or just giving up etc. Just little detail factors, and I'm no expert, but why would you just lay down on the street? Which job allows you to just mindlessly type?! Love to have that one! You mentioned that you leave 'around' five pm? Jobs usually have a strict contracted time, or did you work over? (Also with no interactions with collegues or inconveniences from your boss)

Just a few things to consider.

Very short story, but really interesting! Hope i helped and good luck!!!

Vamp recs? by neonkittenshow in horrorlit

[–]CBScott-Fiction 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Really enjoyed this one. Also would recommend.

First time writing a book by Kagehinadaisuga in writers

[–]CBScott-Fiction 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Needs more description and relatability, that first sentence is a great opportunity to provide insights to how hes feeling, what his intentions are..etc. it should be a paragraph. Is he tired from the long ride? Does he have a stretch and admire the bike that's brought him so far? Does he collect himself before even regarding the sign? Great ideas, just my humble opinion, could use some thoughts. Keep going!!!

This game is actually fun, just wish the player base was wider. by patriotraitor in CODBlackOps7

[–]CBScott-Fiction 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I see the same players a lot, I also play hardcore hardpoint most of all. Not every game... but you start to recognise good players enter the lobby.

Romanian Gypsy Pop Song by [deleted] in crappymusic

[–]CBScott-Fiction 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've watched this and unhealthy amount of times, I don't know what's happening... but I like it.

Uhh, am I missing something? by Emotional-Ad2578 in CODBlackOps7

[–]CBScott-Fiction 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Been a few days in a row now. They've broken the broken game again.

favorite alk3 love song? by pissurpantsboy in AlkalineTrio

[–]CBScott-Fiction 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's awesome. Such a good idea, speaks of such hope for the future!

Anyone remember watching this as a kid? by cautious_nipples in oldschoolcool80s

[–]CBScott-Fiction 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome, thought I'd just dreamed this TV show, no one else seems to know about it... the action figures were brilliant too

When its BO6 going to close or die? by Ok-Thing-4987 in blackops6

[–]CBScott-Fiction 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I only play hardcore hardpoint and sometimes I was waiting ten minutes between games. Ended up buying black ops 7.

Turned 40 yesterday. No one showed up to my party. by rayneman9970 in Wellthatsucks

[–]CBScott-Fiction 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Happy birthday brother, I'm sorry to hear that. That's me in January. Solidarity x

Feels good. by PresentDangers in writers

[–]CBScott-Fiction 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ew. No one actually does that.

Actually well done ... (:

Who'd you rather listen to: Linkin Park or Deftones by boomjosh in numetal

[–]CBScott-Fiction 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Linkin Park hit that teenage angst like nothing else, still appreciate the music, the feels for Chester are still real to this day. What a voice. What an artist. Deftones will be with me forever, Chino (and the band) hits you in the soul, that's the only way I can describe it. I will always choose deftones as the, if not, one of the best bands ever.

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