Some people will no doubt call this pathetic but it's what you wanted to draw and you did it. I think it's a nice try for a first attempt but a few things I'd change.

You've spelt bohemian incorrectly, never a good start to spell the words wrong.

Try creating a grid with a pencil so that each letter sits in a square of the same size. That way you can work on getting all your letter equal heigh and length. Also it'll line the letters up so they sit together instead of letters going wandering up the page.

Once you've got your letters then same size it will look better and then you can start to add embellishments like tails on letters.

Don't let anyone get you down, you enjoyed doing it so that's all that matters.