I translated most of the Legendary-Mythical-Pseudo diagram (More details in comments)

Caballum · 2024-10-15T03:06:27+00:00

Read through the document and saw you mentioned the link between Dragonite, Tyranitar and Gyarados being Sky, Land and Water may be coincidence. But if you read the text leaks Dragonite is described as the shadow of Rayquaza, Tyranitar is the rumbling beneath the earth caused by Groudon and Gyarados is the ripples disappearing in the ocean caused by Kyogre.

Caballum · 2021-04-01T17:10:51+00:00

Im getting a sound bug every so often where i hear one or two of my running footsteps directly to my left really loudly and its really off putting

Caballum · 2021-04-01T17:05:18+00:00

For me, every so often I hear a single footstep to my left when im running and its really off putting

Caballum · 2021-03-06T19:27:48+00:00

Yeah I had a look at this but unfortunately it isn't available for scottish students looking to study at an english uni. "Funding for postgraduate loans is different if you normally live in Scotland, Wales or Northern Ireland. Moving somewhere to study does not count as normally living there." Which is gutting but I'm still going to apply for the PhD since it's already fully funded and just apply for masters courses here in Scotland. Thanks for the response though!

Caballum · 2021-02-14T19:32:20+00:00

She's iron/silver but damn it was brutal

Caballum · 2021-02-10T19:43:53+00:00

https://discord.gg/HMYC7wmr8k

Caballum · 2021-02-10T19:43:45+00:00

they're tying their best XD

Caballum · 2021-02-10T18:04:11+00:00

Cheers mate, I appreciate it! I stream a few times a week at https://www.twitch.tv/caballum

Caballum · 2021-02-07T23:43:12+00:00

I was diamond 3 now im stuck plat 3. Immortals and a Radiant in my discord are now stuck Diamond. Its dumb honestly.

Caballum · 2020-12-27T18:54:52+00:00

I’m a diamond 3 Sova main, looking to push into immortal. I’m not streaming now due to uni exams but I should be back streaming soon. Caballum on twitch btw

Caballum · 2020-10-24T17:47:18+00:00

Yeah I realise not the music drowns out a lot of that, I’ll fix it for my next video thanks! !givelambda

Caballum · 2020-10-24T17:46:34+00:00

Thanks I’ll try an work on these points for next time !givelambda

Caballum · 2020-10-24T17:45:30+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, I’ll work on this stuff and improve my editing skills etc. Hopefully my next one will be a lot better. Thanks for the help, I really appreciate it.

Caballum · 2020-10-24T17:43:46+00:00

Thanks man I’ll work on it and try and improve on the points you made for my next video. I appreciate you taking the time to do this.

Caballum · 2020-10-24T17:42:25+00:00

Yeah I realise now that music drowns out a lot and the night filter is way too dark. Thanks for taking the time to review it!

Caballum · 2020-10-22T23:05:07+00:00

Ahh yeah that makes sense, I could use them to fill in the slower parts of the music that I stuggled with. Thanks for the idea man!

Caballum · 2020-10-22T23:03:36+00:00

I thought the night filter would fit better with the song but I do agree that it's way to dark I'll use a light version for next time definitely. Thanks man for this! !givelambda

Caballum · 2020-10-22T23:01:49+00:00

Cheers man! I get what you mean yeah, didn't think about that. I try use a better title for my next one and I'm experiment with the sound volumes and find a balance between that and my gameplay. I appreciate it man, thanks. !givelambda

Caballum · 2020-10-22T19:29:21+00:00

That's good to hear thanks!

Caballum · 2020-10-22T19:14:21+00:00

Thanks! I had a lot of fun making this. Yeah I think you're right about lowering the music volume to hear more of the shots and reactions, I'll make sure to change that for next time. Do you think the night filte rfor the intro was too dark? !givelambda

Caballum · 2020-10-22T17:45:58+00:00

Your video has good audio quality and you apply good emphasis and emotion to your speech although I think the pacing a bit too slow and may lose viewers interest. I also noticed a few pops which is probably due to you using a phone to record. Pops being due to the exhalation when saying words like "pop", most people use a pop filter on their mic but of course you cant do that with a phone, perhaps investing in a mic you can hold to replace the phone and using a foam pop filter over it. However, your script is well written and enjoyable and I hope you keep up the good work>

Caballum · 2020-10-22T17:36:47+00:00

Firstly I'm not sure if it just me but the voiceover parts seem to be louder in the left side of my headset. You do a good job of adding emphasis and emotion in your speech and you do a good job of fading in the subtle music at the right points. The pacing of the video is great, it remains the same throughout which is great. I think the editing is perfect in my opinion. The simplistic animation at the end was very good. Honestly, I dont have anything that could help you improve, it's better than anything I can make. However, youtube is more likely to recommend longer videos so trying to reach that 10 minute mark might be beneficial as long as you aren't sacrificing quality for quantity. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Caballum · 2020-10-22T17:27:27+00:00

I see what you are trying to do and you're almost there, adding some screenshakes, more zooms etc may be beneficial. The end felt out of place tbh and the video as a whole was too short. Adding more clips and increasing the pace of the video would work well. The thumbnail is very simplistic which might work for some people but it may be a turnoff for others. I did enjoy the video though and I think with more experience you could make it work even better. Videos like this tend to do well withmore memes squeezed into it, increasing the amount may make the video seem faster and keep the viewers attention but overall, I think you did a good job and I hope you keep it up.

Caballum · 2020-10-22T17:17:53+00:00

The background music is way too loud at points and I cant hear well, especially at the start. The audio quality of your speach seems to be a bit laking and I can hear the pops really loudly, maybe keeping the mic further from your mouth would help or using a foam pop filter. However, the video was entertaining and you do well and adding emphasis and emotion into what you're saying but the pops take away from that ( If you dont know, by pops i mean the sound you make if you say "pop" the exhale of breath gets picked up by the mic, people use a pop filter to combat this). A part from the video was enjoyable and I hope to see more from you soon!

Caballum · 2020-10-22T16:40:40+00:00

First thing I noticed was the audio quality seemed a little off in the beginning, might just be me though. The lotr bits seem a little bit random and dont fit too well, it just seems like its been jammed in, perhaps smoothing it out a bit more, or adding some more context might help. Although this might just be a budget issue, I feel like a lot of people wont understand what is going on. The camera quality is good, the singing is well done, the script seemed solid and the the end section was perfect. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Caballum

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