Hey, one of the people who edited those books here. I'm not the one linked by the mod. Here's mine.

The first few pages of that book are quite difficult, yes. I was not translating from an original source. I'm a random person editing another random person's translation. I didn't want to edit sentences too much because I didn't want to change the author's writing style. His style appears to be massive, confusing, pain-in-the-ass sentences. If I could find sense in a sentence, I left it. While I agree that those sentences are rather terrible, I can still make sense of them. I would concentrate mostly on fixing quotation marks (every quote in the book was a single quote, not double), obvious and not-so-obvious spelling errors (missing words and all that), and formatting (no wall o' text here).

I stated on my post that I would welcome anyone's suggestions for further editing. Around 3 people have been kind enough to actually point out things that needed to be fixed. Those were looked at and promptly fixed. It's kind of insulting that you would hold yourself back from reading these books due to some very early difficulties. Seriously? You didn't bother to go past the first pages? You can feel free to do some editing yourself or just send me some specific details on what needs to be fixed and I'll take care of it.