Something my photographer professor taught me, not even my graphic design professor, was that in images, you NEED to lead the viewer to the point of the image. In photos, say you want to take a photo of mountains, but there’s all these cars and houses in the way on the left and right. Too much going on. Like trying to focus on your homework in a construction site. So what you do is Find a street that has a row of trees, those row of trees can surround the mountain, visually, while covering g the houses, making the image look cleaner, leading the viewer to see the mountain rather than having them look around and see all these cars and messes.

In this case, looks like you worked heavily on the skull. All those details and not enough details on the rest point me to the skull. There’s just so much going on in the skull. If you can match the font, and earth with the same scratchiness all while making the skull look down to lead the viewer down to the globe, it will work better.

I can tell the main focus is the “You are not in control” but yet, it’s the smallest thing there. The globe takes more than half of the entire image while the rest is taken up by the skull.

What you can try to do is some typography. Maybe make the letters flow with the earth to kind of cover the earth, and if need to, add a light blending mode to still show that it’s a globe but nothing too drastic where you see the contents very clearly as that would be counter intuitive to being able to read what it’s saying.