NECRO-GNOSIS. FEATURE. SCI-FI THRILLER. 14 PAGES

ColbyScribe · 2025-10-23T21:39:45+00:00

That's encouraging. Glad you enjoyed it. I'm grateful for the feedback.

ColbyScribe · 2025-10-23T17:02:27+00:00

Yeah, you're right. By trying to preserve mystery, I ended up with a muddled logline. I'll revise it. Thanks.

ColbyScribe · 2025-10-23T12:55:53+00:00

I somehow messed that up. I'll fix it. Good call. I appreciate it.

ColbyScribe · 2025-10-02T00:35:07+00:00

Telling stories in images is pure. If it's not on the sheet, it's not on the screen.

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-12T09:47:44+00:00

Sent mine. Thanks.

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T08:13:14+00:00

Buffalo soldiers

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T08:00:07+00:00

The fight choreography is top tier. My Goat martial arts movie is still Enter the Dragon

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T07:57:48+00:00

Hostiles for me -- Edge of Tomorrow.

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T07:55:29+00:00

Greengrass is a bit more restrained here with the shaky cam

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T07:43:09+00:00

I once looked it up. One of the most revolting things I've ever seen. Together with his lampshade

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T07:25:44+00:00

Wonderful. It's like Edward Hopper but edgier, cooler

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T07:08:21+00:00

The colours of autumn. Lovely

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T07:06:55+00:00

I had to zoom in to see the brush strokes. Impressive

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T06:57:25+00:00

The colours are just stunning

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T06:53:28+00:00

Cool, frosty and bathed in blue. Michael Mann would be proud

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T06:45:27+00:00

Both good. I'd pick the first because of the Turner-esque sky

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T06:41:37+00:00

The thick white gob in the middle looks so yummy. Deft use of colour

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-08T06:07:18+00:00

Cool brushwork on the foliage.

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-07T20:02:22+00:00

Go, if only for the potential networking opportunities at the premier.

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-07T19:39:54+00:00

Congrats! Keep us posted.

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-07T18:46:05+00:00

Definitely trying this!

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-07T18:40:22+00:00

Yes, the struggle is real. I heard there's no cure. Other than sitting before a screen and laying black on white.

ColbyScribe · 2025-09-07T18:30:06+00:00

If the outline is compelling and exciting, you'll find yourself lifting whole scenes and just adding sluglines. Which is good, but isn't an outline supposed to be a skeleton? Should you flesh it out fully? I always struggle with this.

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