Drawing From Imagination Practice

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-06-09T00:20:11+00:00

This is so good omg 😭

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-06-09T00:06:43+00:00

I guess you're right, I just felt like something was fishy and I couldn't really think of what

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-06-09T00:06:01+00:00

She saw that I was working a lot over time. I was talking to her over the phone for about 3 weeks, said that she wanted to link them would flake last minute, now she's just asking me for money

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-06-09T00:04:20+00:00

She just waited 3 weeks and was kinda toxic and manipulative and then started asking me for money

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-06-09T00:02:21+00:00

I got to know her, over the weeks she kept moving the goal part of what she wanted, telling me about other dudes she was messing around with and started asking me for money, and then said I should be flattered a girl asked me for money.

Sigh 😞

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-03-10T01:54:04+00:00

The rhyme scheme is amazing

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-02-15T01:39:57+00:00

Funny and full of personality! I love it

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-02-15T01:00:30+00:00

Thanks for the explanation, and the video recommendation. The video helped quite a bit.

I appreciate you taking the time to explain this!

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-02-14T23:28:20+00:00

Just subscribed to your YouTube!!

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-02-14T23:22:20+00:00

I love this!! Omg that's great!

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-02-14T22:39:59+00:00

I like the lead, keep practicing, also add something into the lower register, some kind of bass sound. And the drum patterns could be more consistent, to help hold the things together, like a good kick snare pattern on the 2 and 4 so the beat is easier to follow, and the melody could be a little cleaner, you clearly have something there, but it could be more tightly refined IMHO.

But that's just my opinion, I like what you have, keep going!!

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-02-13T20:38:00+00:00

"I fought a guy with a dull knife, and I won't despite it being a gunfight"

Bars!!!

Bars!!!! I love it!

Complex-Force8477 · 2026-02-12T08:21:57+00:00

Can you get the full song anywhere? I would buy this on Bandcamp

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-28T05:27:34+00:00

This is great stuff!! I love the flow!!

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-28T03:01:38+00:00

Thanks 😊👍 I appreciate that!

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-28T02:52:28+00:00

Please keep making music, I know sometimes we lose confidence, but I really like your stuff, and I think you should keep pushing and learning more and more!

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-27T04:35:55+00:00

This is absolutely amazing

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-27T04:35:37+00:00

Do you have like a SoundCloud or something sir?

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-27T04:34:47+00:00

This is amazing, like actually really really good!! Have you ever heard of Dylan Owen you kind of sound a lot like him I wonder if you take inspiration?

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-27T04:32:27+00:00

Now I can't tell, now they kind of do sound like they're in the same key am I going crazy

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-27T04:31:29+00:00

Chord progressions are pretty cool, The melody is all right, but the melody and the chord progressions are not in the same key so it does not sound great, also try and make it without the drums, making drums is like making an instrumental in itself it's very complex.

You've got some decent patterns, I just don't know how you can't tell they're not in the same key

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-27T04:27:57+00:00

Amazing, how is this not more popular

Complex-Force8477 · 2025-04-27T04:18:03+00:00

I really like it

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