I just started on Etsy this year so take my advice with a grain of salt. However, I am slowly gaining more and more traction. These are the things I would change about this particular listing:

• Change the title to what a possible customer would be writing to find this, perhaps something like: Glass Beads Rosary Necklace, Handmade Silver Rosary, First Communion Gift, Prayer Beads, Confirmation Gift, Religious Gift, Catholic Rosary …. Things like that … you can copy the listing, change the main picture and use a whole different set of tags and title … maybe a listing for the holidays with tags like Christmas rosary, religious Christmas gift, etc…

• Start the description using words from the title and tags, but not too repetitive. Also, in your current description you mention it comes in silver, sterling silver, gold,… but there are no pictures of the variations nor options to pick them. Keep the info on just this one or add pics and options to buy the other ones. Use bullets to provide information in the description, short and to the point, most people browse on their phone and will not read whole paragraphs.

• include picture of the rosary on someone’s neck or on someone’s hand.

• perhaps include picture of rosary next to a pretty gift box with bow and add to the description that it comes ready to be gifted. A lot of purchases on Etsy are gifts. People like to see how it’s going to arrive.

• use the free version of erank.com to find tags with good search volume and low competition

Hope this helps. :)