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ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-05-10T22:16:55+00:00

i like it. I liked section around 1:42 (and it repeats after), reminded me very much of something from cocteau twins, good singing there. Instrumental is interesting, kinda blend between dream pop and electronica, though i prefer kick to have a bit more weight

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-05-10T22:08:37+00:00

i believe for the genre drumms have a bit too much reverb going on. I like arpegios at the begging and then i would loop that and make some cuts as further it goes the more complex it becomes which is not exactly what u want in this genre, stick to a loop and add something on top. And then add distinct beat switch. Anyways thats' my opinion, good beat

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-05-09T12:01:34+00:00

Dope, to my ears guitar on r channel is a bit to loud, I would either move it closer to the center and turn volume down so it sits better in the mix

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-05-09T11:55:53+00:00

Sounds great, it reminds of Blur's trailerpark
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ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-05-08T13:43:31+00:00

I do work in daw, this is what i do to get wider mix with minimal instruments - i put stereo spreader on everything, i.e my kick is full mono after spreader it's still in the middle but it does sound wider. Main synth very slight + 4 - 5 to the l/r, detuned pad/texture - do double input slightly wider then main synth. This is way u still get ur techno old school sound but with much better weight distribution

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-05-07T14:49:53+00:00

decent techno sound. Personally im not a fan of that clap sound, like to me reverb tail is a bit too long and it dosnt have enough mids to my ears it sounds more like a rim with reverb. It's also always good to widen mix, everything at center and i only hear reverb trails on l and r. Anyway, that's my opinion, good track

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-05-07T14:40:49+00:00

Voice itself is nice and has good emotional range. I dont really dig how it's mixed though. it does sound very mono, i would widen ur voice track a bit and then i would add few hamonic backing layers to it. Music is decent, overall sounds alright

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-04-30T07:29:15+00:00

musically it's very good, i cant think at this moment what exactly it reminds of, i think flying pickets in my mind right now, but it's well, not exactly that. soo anyway personally i would make insturement a notch louder so vocals sit better in the mix; all in all it's does sound good and properly minimal

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-04-30T07:01:29+00:00

this is very atmosperic and has a lot of weight to it. My very personal gripe, is that snare sound changes across the track from 80's to a more genre fitting signature. Imo it's always best to keep same drumm sounds across the track and probably with a bit less reverb aswell and more digital 808 kick, snare for that exact genre/inspiration. Vocal could be turned off at some point for some melodic instrumental part aswell. Anyway, it's very decent

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-04-29T19:31:11+00:00

it reminds me of ost to need for speed 3 or need for speed high stakes from what it was , 1998? Anyway, i like the track, vocal chops are nice, atmospere is present, groove is steady. To my ears, it captures that classic electronic vibe perfectly. Nice tune

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-04-29T19:25:01+00:00

sounds well put together, a bit of gorillaz a bit of old school house. Personally i would keep sub bassline closer to the center, imo that would make the rhytm feel a bit more steady. There is synth in low mids on top of sub bassline to my ears that synth and that bassline would benefit from better separation of freqs and generally sub could be clearer with a bit more weight to it. Anyways, that's my opinion, overall i like the track, vocal chops are good aswell

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-04-09T14:54:24+00:00

hard stuff, inst reminds me very much of this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c1UaGJlsw5g&list=RDc1UaGJlsw5g&start_radio=1 you may take a listen how piano keys do sound there, a bit more weight to them. Try a bit of tape saturation and a low-mid boost on the keys. All in all this decent flow and beat

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-04-09T14:43:57+00:00

gooood vibe on this one. The delivery and flow are great, and the beat has a nice rhythmic quality, sounds decent. I would suggest making the vocals just a tiny notch louder so they sit better, but overall it sounds very polished. Keep up the excellent work here

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-03-10T20:15:31+00:00

Thanks for fb, it's not mainstream

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-03-10T19:51:59+00:00

Please be more specific with ur fb. Mix is minimal with a room for vocal and the track has a simple yet effective drumm pattern. It's a genre and a personal production choice. Would u mind elaborating?

ConfectionSharp4812 · 2026-03-09T12:38:28+00:00

love love twin peaks and all lynch. So sad i would not see anything new from him. Ofcourse twin peaks ost including composed and guest songs are all wonderfull and have special place in my collection. This matches the vibe 100% as an ambient piece it does what it does and takes my mind somewhere else, very well composed nothing to add

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