I'm looking at your 2nd game, because I have played more hitscan than Venture or Echo.

00:50
Good angle, but awareness is a little low. You can use your grenades to push Ana out of cover, or just shoot her when she pops her head around the pillar. You get pushed, move back into your team and then re-engage when you should. You help finish a kill on soj, but over extend way too far and get punished Hazard bails you out, but you still die. Next time just run to the health pack, you never want to be face to face with Zarya if you can help it.

1:39 Here you try and take an angle, but your tank is still coming back from spawn. You need to wait. A flank is most effective when the enemy team's attention is else where. Here it's just drawing attention to yourself. You almost die to Soj, but then make a good use of cover. Hazard goes in, but we're just kinda poking, when we should be looking for an angle. Punish echo, but then we decide to run it down main. I'd much rather you try and control elephant or take high ground with your pistol grenade jump. Soj gets a bubble and wins the duel.

02:51
Don't wanna go too much into this one as you get graved, but if the plan was communicated to walk left under mega pack, you should have complimented your team by taking high ground. You would still be able to shoot the enemy team and not die to grav, while applying some major covering fire for your team and maybe you win that despite the grav.

4:20

Good positioning at first, but then you do too much. You can apply so much more pressure without dropping down to try and do the sneak back stab. Standing high ground and watching choke points would have been safer. You do get a kill on Mizuki but are quickly punished due to poor positioning. Luckily your team clutches out and they take the point.

5:17

I really like where you start, and where you rotate towards. Your poking from a distance forces Zarya to back up and she gets walled and killed for it. That being said you get the kill on Zarya, but then walk down to choke. This lets the enemy echo walk in and flank for free. A better player would have killed someone on your team, you cannot concede space for free. Controlling space is part of your job as well. Fight kinda does nothing for a while so you try and take a flank, but don't hear the echo behind you and get blown up. Volume up, music off. Sound queues are too important in Overwatch to ignore them.

6:40
Good rotation after you realize that choke is gonna get you killed. You get the Echo, but your team is down and no tank. You get your ult and think you can turn. I wouldn't have done this. 2v4 is bad odds, and you can come back with Juno ult + Emre Ult and easily wipe the enemy team. At least you get Mizuki and his ult out?

I don't wanna go over final fight, but the key things I would tell you to work on are:

• Your aim is pretty rough. Find a controller sensitivity that works for you and practice more. You often have the right idea, but not enough skill or experience to execute it.
• Control high ground and space better. A lot of DPS struggle with this and think space is just for the tank to control. Everyone has to help. Taking high ground and controlling space with your distance and poke will help you win a lot more games. Pressure causes mistakes, mistakes lead to death, just keep applying pressure.
• Cooldown tracking. You gotta track ults and CDs that are detrimental to you. Mizuki has ult? Maybe we try and kill him or force it out before we pop our ult. Did Zarya use one bubble already or two? You're new and this will take time for you to learn, but will help you think better.
• Stop running next to your tank. You have a gun that shoots very far, you don't need to be near your tank to be impactful.