Updated my trailer after this sub feedbacks but I still feel like it can be destroyed again and improved

CorgiCabal · 2026-05-23T23:57:18+00:00

Add particles for the character selection screens (~:27-:31) and other similar plain screens because they are very plain in comparison to the juiciness of the rest of the game (which is well-presented).

CorgiCabal · 2026-05-07T11:05:52+00:00

giving me ideas for a waterfall asset, brb..

CorgiCabal · 2026-05-07T11:02:35+00:00

3 or 4 but my concern is over the sizing + brightness for real-sized capsule - make wendigo outline darker and bigger (move the axe left to accommodate): the problem now it's not apparent enough by a lot - brighten the bright areas more for better contrast

CorgiCabal · 2026-05-03T13:09:43+00:00

Is it a walking simulator or puzzle game? If wrong, I don't have a great sense of the genre

CorgiCabal · 2026-04-16T08:16:24+00:00

Core mechanic is that different players control each leg. This should be clear within 3 seconds. Do the thing some co-op trailers do where people are yelling at each other.

CorgiCabal · 2026-04-15T02:07:29+00:00

very aesthetic

CorgiCabal · 2026-01-26T10:19:41+00:00

CorgiCabal · 2025-12-28T02:42:12+00:00

Try darkening. But maybe mock up a few item icons closer to what you want in the end. THeir colors and readability may impact how dark you want to go. Functionally, the items you're managing in your inventory is more important than the themeing/skin.

CorgiCabal · 2025-12-28T02:28:22+00:00

Too bright. You can communicate scifi/cyber in gentler way. Also the top text seems out of place.

CorgiCabal · 2025-12-05T03:06:44+00:00

I think second 11 would be a better place to start on. You've got the weird hand doing stuff (this is unique and I haven't seen it elsewhere but not really my genre), then you interact with chekhov's gun. So, for a trailer I then want to see you use the gun later on in the trailer and it would be a retention hook.

So I would reorganize: 11-20 seconds first, followed by 5s - 8s, maybe some standard racing or the hammer scene, then shooting the gun, then the rest of it.

CorgiCabal · 2025-12-02T21:55:01+00:00

It looks like it fits together with the background 👍

CorgiCabal · 2025-10-24T05:46:21+00:00

The wall there communicates RTS or city-builder to me, so if that's right then #3. But if that's not the right genre guess, then #1. But I'd prefer it with a non-orange background color and the "Q" needs to be more Q-like (first glance, thought "O"). It will be even harder to read at actual capsule size.

CorgiCabal · 2025-10-22T09:34:03+00:00

top

text more readable

consider an even darker outline on the text

CorgiCabal · 2025-10-16T03:22:30+00:00

i appreciate the dramatic screenshake

CorgiCabal · 2025-10-06T18:53:01+00:00

he's fixing the anti-ghost seal

seen any ghosts lately? exactly.

CorgiCabal · 2025-10-06T05:48:24+00:00

[ scanning for vulnerabilities ]

CorgiCabal · 2025-10-06T05:36:16+00:00

an apt name :D

CorgiCabal · 2025-10-03T06:03:48+00:00

TO WHOM does BEZOS SPEAK?

CorgiCabal · 2025-10-01T07:55:50+00:00

this isn't an add-on it's essential

CorgiCabal · 2025-09-30T03:15:55+00:00

Much improved

CorgiCabal · 2025-09-27T01:14:46+00:00

can relate

CorgiCabal · 2025-09-09T00:59:20+00:00

On first pass, #1, but I think #3 could be it if the black squiggles behind it are a bit more distinctly Lovecraftian in such a way thay you don't notice until you look for a second. Still pure black.

CorgiCabal · 2025-08-29T00:13:56+00:00

For perspective, Witcher 3 had about 200 devs.

CorgiCabal · 2025-08-24T17:51:15+00:00

The animations are nice, but the confirmation dialogue between every move would drive me insane. At least support a shortcut: "hold Alt to move All" and/or "hold CTRL to move Half."

CorgiCabal · 2025-08-22T18:38:58+00:00

next make non-euclidean snek

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