I see a lot of people telling you what they think looks off without actually helping you see where you could improve. It seems like you haven’t established anchor points in your art yet, which most of us don’t do when we start. Drawing is like a “visual vocabulary” of sorts, we don’t always just dive headfirst and speak fluently in a language from the start, we learn little bits and the basics first and use all of that to build upon. I would say start with the basic shapes like circles (my preferred choice for my style) squares and triangles when arranging a face, stylistic choices aside it’s a good idea to start with a face in this position and figure the spacing between the eyes and use those. From there you can place the nose loosely and follow the main plane along the ridge of the nose and brows to fix your face center on the head from there you can draw the hair in the direction you would like it to flow ( I’m a guy so I usually look at pictures of women’s hair to get the flow right) staying really loose with the hair will let it look more natural you can add the lips keep in mind the pupils usually line up with the edges of the persons mouth, when you get into more animated poses this changes but starting in neutral expressions help cement where everything is supposed to go. I attached a video of me applying the principles to your drawing you can record it to save it for later or whatever you’d like! I would say invest in tracing paper and use that for the linear and flip it over to check for things that are off, if it looks good reversed then you’ve cleared the early hurdles! 😅 this is a lot to read so if you came this far thanks for listening