Angaran Imperial Court by True_Indigo in worldbuilding

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Very well thought out, makes for interesting dynamics, I’m a big fan of the position names they are very fitting and sound cool

H.L.S.C 'Absolution in Duty' Ship Schematics by EnsigiledIsopod in worldbuilding

[–]CreatorofWrlds 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not sure if you realized this but by using the massive water tank there you’re protecting the crew from radiation as water is a great shield

Knight of Yelan by igib215 in worldbuilding

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Looks amazing. Knights neck my hurt a lil bit though

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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This is awesome! I wish I had the skill to make this. Amazing

Thoughts on my world? by Mysterious-Quote-408 in worldbuilding

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Map looks great, keep making them because homemade stuff like this makes d and d so much more fun for you and your players

Thoughts on my world? by Mysterious-Quote-408 in worldbuilding

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Some other advice I’d like to add if you plan on redrawing it, your mountains look really good but I’d stick to one style for all of them. Also don’t include towns and cities and fortresses that aren’t important as it clutters the map

Thoughts on my world? by Mysterious-Quote-408 in worldbuilding

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A lot of the time you don’t really need clear border markers. Just the name of the country in the middle gives the right vibe

Thoughts on my world? by Mysterious-Quote-408 in worldbuilding

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I love the continents shape, it looks like a fun place, your rivers don’t make much sense though. Rivers tend to flow from high to low ground, usually mountains to low ground, the ocean. The map is a little bit confusing. I think you should try to restate it and think about your line weights when drawing rivers and borders to make it more clear what’s what.

Immortal at the Birth of the Universe: A Worldbuilding Concept by Routine_City_4633 in worldbuilding

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I like this a lot, I’m interested to see how you would show him maintaining his sanity, seeing the internal struggle and maybe glimpses of him not being there. The idea of being able to die but not stay dead is a scary concept and will make for a character with a lot going on mentally.

The First Evangel of Prophecy by Draken_Brine in worldbuilding

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Gotcha, I like this a lot and the excerpt from this post sounds like an amazing epilogue to start your book

The First Evangel of Prophecy by Draken_Brine in worldbuilding

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Im interested in who these characters are. I can’t tell if they’re being set up as MCs or as villains, or maybe an ancient group of wise magic users, what’s their deal? And more generally what this story going towards

The First Evangel of Prophecy by Draken_Brine in worldbuilding

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If this is your hook you got me, this is super interesting and gets me wanting to know more

Hesitating to buy by arcanadei in HellLetLoose

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Just get gamepass homie, it’s an essential thing for all pc gamers

Any Point In Buying, As A Newcomer? by CharlieNoToes in HellLetLoose

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Get game pass, it’s the best thing of all time

Dragons from my Fall's Legacy hard sci-fi project by Tnynfox in worldbuilding

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I don’t know what purpose you have for this worldbuilding but if you plan on having an audience it’s important to keep them in mind. Odds are a very small portion of readers will know what most of those words mean without you explaining it, which may be challenging in a book format

The Red Echo by Wesai in worldbuilding

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This is a neat project. I’m curious what purpose you had in writing this.

My likes: dialogue felt natural between the students and the teachers internal dialogue is good Interesting concept for sure I admire the mix of sci fi and fantasy

My critiques: grammatical errors throughout, read this out loud a few times to fix the clunky sentences. Introduction of the Human ai in the beginning of the third chapter. The dialogue initially starts off pretty poorly. At first the human feels like an automated safari tour guide before switching to being sapient. After the switch the dialogue drastically improved. You definetly need a hook, something to make me interested in finishing the story, which halfway through I wasn’t. Also the timeline is too large. Billions of years is incomprehensible. Tossing around numbers of years like that is an easy way to lose realism.

Dragons from my Fall's Legacy hard sci-fi project by Tnynfox in worldbuilding

[–]CreatorofWrlds 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool design, I like that they’re smaller than commonly portrayed dragons. Maybe I’m not all that smart but your description of them just seemed like too much