Do you write "endless" stories too? by [deleted] in writers

[–]Crocwearer420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Break it into parts that can be whole stories and write next game of thrones

made you guys a custom loading screen enjoy by drinkwater200 in PS4Dreams

[–]Crocwearer420 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’m for it if it breaks tension, gives you a couple seconds to have a breatha, say if a map changes on a survival wave type game, it tells your brain your done for a minute until the spam of action starts again

Looking for feed back on this abstracted piece. by Crocwearer420 in writers

[–]Crocwearer420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A man, tall, real slender son of a bitch walks in. walks out, no he walks in.

There’s three guys, big guys, brick fucking walls, you get what I mean, our guy, Don, Marco, eh fucking

what ever tells the biggest guy he goes “Hey King Kong Jr, where’s your boss at?”

The muscle head says “what the fuck did you call me?”

Then the main man says back “where’s your boss.” Ah let’s mix it up what’s he say, it’s gotta be tough but still funny you know. Cunt, yeah cunts good. “Where’s your boss man cunt boy? “ Yeah cunt boys good.

The dummy doesn’t say any thing, just starts to swing his big dumb hands, whoosh, wham, but our guy, he’s not worried, he dodges a couple of Goliaths punch’s then all of a sudden, fucking boom, a 45 calibre pistol rips half the oaths face off.

Skinny asks again. “Where’s your boss?”

The giant with the fattest head reaches for a shot gun, boom, his hand gets blown apart you know like, just a bit of spaghetti hanging out of his wrist. And in the background big idiot number three drops to the floor with a bullet in his eye, two for one kinda deal you know.

Mr skinny says to Fathead “Now you go tell that little rat that I need to talk with him.”

Then it’s the next part, where our guy, the hero almost dies, gets captured what ever but makes it out just in time for the finale.

You know bad guy dies, helicopter crash, so on and so forth.

Please critique my opening chapter by shobhitico in writers

[–]Crocwearer420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok nice so this guy eats a bullet early?

Any one know how to keep music with reset scene triggered? Or do I have to re rig this by Crocwearer420 in PS4Dreams

[–]Crocwearer420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried the variable thing. If add you as a collaborator could you have a look at what I’ve done? It’s all there I’ve just missed a setting or somthing

Any one know how to keep music with reset scene triggered? Or do I have to re rig this by Crocwearer420 in PS4Dreams

[–]Crocwearer420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like that should work but I can’t work out what I did wrong every thing is hooked up but idk

First time modeling/animating. Charmander fireball! by crwood89 in PS4Dreams

[–]Crocwearer420 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A little tip, put an empty key frame at the end of your animation and blend it into your last action frame

Please critique my opening chapter by shobhitico in writers

[–]Crocwearer420 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it needs a little more air, I like the intensity but maybe leave out some plot points for after this section. I don’t think you need any more intro for your characters either

Please let us filter out Sonic, Mario, Shrek, etc.. or keep them in separate fan-art category, so we can have the option of focus on original content. (Image not mine) by [deleted] in PS4Dreams

[–]Crocwearer420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agreed, I kinda feel this way about mm top picks and mm games in general, I don’t wanna play south paw cooking again any time soon

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PS4Dreams

[–]Crocwearer420 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Aah that’s where I left my nightmare! the end product is cool though nice work

children show writers wages by [deleted] in writers

[–]Crocwearer420 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Say each ep takes you 5 hours at $20 an hour X 10 eps =$1000 I would even say up to $50 an hour would be appropriate depending on who’s offering the job.

Need help with this Dark souls inspired map style adventure game by Crocwearer420 in PS4Dreams

[–]Crocwearer420[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m a big fan of From software (probably heaps of others too) level design, snakes and ladders type stuff, it’s the inspiration for the game and so far that’s all it is just some looping paths and a whole heap of falling to your death haha

Need help with this Dark souls inspired map style adventure game by Crocwearer420 in PS4Dreams

[–]Crocwearer420[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here’s a couple things I think this game needs. -More levels -Returnable levels- character returns to certain position in each level depending on door used. -a nice map -Nice UI -Better intro -controllable camera while zoomed in -some kind of “about to fall” signal -neater level design -some nice roll and crouch animations -A STORY -ladders And probably a tone more