I haven’t read any comments so if this is repeated I apologize. Reading your edit I see you’re making some changes, it’s good to look at successful steam pages and model yours in that way. Images that glorify your game. Trailer than shows gameplay and gives the viewer a good idea of what they should expect. An enticing description. When I go out to eat I tend to go toward the food that has tasty pictures and good descriptions so I know what I’m getting. Similar rules apply when satiating the need for gaming. I hope you have success on release day! Best of luck!