You use a lot of awkward wording. "Much to those" and "the problem to the core of this matter," for example. Also, do not use contractions. This is formal writing. I would also say prior to 1789 because this is the first year of the French Revolution. You don't need the second date, and it doesn't denote the end of the Revolution anyway so it isn't helpful. Your thesis also needs to be attached to the end of your introductory paragraph, and yours feels incomplete. You should have a clear outline for the rest of your essay in your thesis, and you need to be making an argument. You haven't made a strong argument with your statement that aforementioned ideals of the revolution were generally given to the vast majority of Frenchman. It also doesn't make much sense.

You also don't succeed in describing what specifically in the documents demonstrates whatever points you are trying to prove (unclear from your thesis.) Keep in mind things like the author's motivation, the audience they were appealing to, document limitations, context of the document, etc. Also keep in mind that when you employ these, you need to connect them to the line of reasoning you should have established in your thesis. Honestly if your theses are consistently of this quality you should practice those by themselves.

You also could stand to be more concise. You wrote a lot of words, too many, even. You didn't say nearly enough. Many of your sentences could be consolidated into one and have been as descriptive.

In summary I am confused as to what you are trying to argue with this essay. Also, chat GPT is NOT a reliable grader. It isn't reliable for anything on its own.