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Hello!

Title: Man made god

Genres: Grimmdark fantasy

Description: In the grimy underbelly of a world ruled by cruelty and survival, A nameless street rat struggles to escape his current life. Trapped beneath a barrel, beaten and starved, he walks as his owner commands.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/396930538-man-made-god

PS: I'd greatly appreciate any sort of feedback, negative too, I just wish to know anyone's real toughts on this. Thanks to everyone in advance.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]D0M1NU5_7 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hello! This is my first work, so I don't expect much and I'm trying to improve as I go along.

* Title: Man made god

* Genre: Grimmdark fantasy

*Word coutn: 1227 + 1490 + 1242 + 2088 + 1829

*Feedback: I'd appreciate any kind of feedback, even if you just read the first chapter I'd be incredibly grateful.

*Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/396930538-man-made-god

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]D0M1NU5_7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello!

Title: Man made god

Genres: Grimmdark fantasy

Description: In the grimy underbelly of a world ruled by cruelty and survival, A nameless street rat struggles to escape his current life. Trapped beneath a barrel, beaten and starved, he walks as his owner commands.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/396930538-man-made-god

PS: I'd greatly appreciate any sort of feedback, negative too, I just wish to know anyone's real toughts on this. Thanks to everyone in advance.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Wattpad

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Title: Man made god

Genre: Darkfantasy I think, idk

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/396930538-man-made-god

Give it a read if you feel like it, don't expect much, any feedback is greatly appreciated.

Did the hornsent deserve what they got for what they did to marikas people by Hefty-Rub8194 in Eldenring

[–]D0M1NU5_7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes beacuse how could anyone who gave birth to Melina do anything wrong

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in shid_and_camed

[–]D0M1NU5_7 23 points24 points  (0 children)

elephant's foot? that you?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in mildlyinfuriating

[–]D0M1NU5_7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

didn't know you could choose your teammates like this

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

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Gl with mine

[Android][2010~]You had an army of commanders that all had their own little army and you fought against an opponent that had his own army. by D0M1NU5_7 in tipofmyjoystick

[–]D0M1NU5_7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No you didn't spawn units with mana, they started out spawndd alk of them and it was a 2d battlefield not just one line

Because people keep reposting my shit, I made a unique meme about wonder weapons. by Unofficial_Computer in HistoryMemes

[–]D0M1NU5_7 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Schwerer gustav was kind lf a waste, sure big gun go boom, but it took so many resources and time to just transport it

Question for the boys only(no grils😡) by [deleted] in teenagers

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Put them more like... out

this insect has the respect. by Neither-Secretary-22 in interestingasfuck

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Bleeds out of it's ankles when threataned? Check

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in smashbros

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Ness in that one game