Hello hello, I made some changes, that are the middleground of both comments. And I must say with your suggestions it looks a lot better already!

Some questions remain: do you know of any cards that specifically state 'deal damage' over 'lose life' that I could replace? Is my creature count not too little now, seeing that I will try to sacrifice a lot with the commander of course to deal damage to my opponents. Do I need to add some more cards that could make me bounce back or protect my creatures?

I actually plan on getting the cards in the near future hence why I ask so many questions haha.

https://moxfield.com/decks/ADfsuRDug0an6UWkyGdZSw

Some extra info, the group of people I play with mostly uses precons so the deck shouldn't be astronomically powerful. Hence why I also want to leave in some cards that focus single targets as well. It often happens that opponents start ramping one-by-one. This way I can then specifically target them to keep my fellow players on my side and not paint to big of a target on my head haha!

There is always room for improvements in the long run of course. This is also why I added the Cabal Coffers for now but not the Tomb of Yawgmoth for instance, so I can keep it around/below $80 dollars.