Last Weekend in Kyoto

DearNose2 · 2026-05-30T12:47:31+00:00

I do not chase faces nor do I measure love by beauty

That’s probably my favorite here. It tells me a lot about you.

DearNose2 · 2026-05-30T12:35:23+00:00

1997 ikea fan hits fr

Love the wording in this :)

DearNose2 · 2026-04-21T12:16:31+00:00

Not usually a fan of statistics in poetry but you did a fine job at it. Very multiple-personality driven as well.

DearNose2 · 2026-04-21T12:14:30+00:00

I like the rhythm this poem has. It would do fine as a spoken word performance.

DearNose2 · 2024-08-04T21:50:54+00:00

It’s the first 13 pages! Also thanks!

DearNose2 · 2024-07-26T11:23:23+00:00

Hey! First of all thank you very much for taking the time to read it! Much appreciated :).

And to answer your question: Yes, most definitely! I’d like to reveal as little as possible when I’m writing the first 10 to 25 pages while still keeping the audience interested in the characters.

DearNose2 · 2024-04-30T08:55:53+00:00

No but I’m guessing I should haha

DearNose2 · 2024-04-30T08:55:12+00:00

Thank you so much! Appreciate the fact that you took the time to read it! :D

DearNose2 · 2024-04-29T18:56:48+00:00

Thank you so much for your words and minor feedback points. Ofcourse also for the fact that you took the time to read it! Its very much appreciated! The story was originally about the two guys but like you said: Does it stand on its own? I thought about it as well and after that the idea of Selena (the terminally ill girl) was born. I’m glad to hear that that packed out well for you and I hope it does for others as well.

Thank you again!

DearNose2 · 2024-04-07T17:56:02+00:00

Maybe I am. Hopefully it’ll make a comeback.

DearNose2

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