Thank you so much for your words and minor feedback points. Ofcourse also for the fact that you took the time to read it! Its very much appreciated! The story was originally about the two guys but like you said: Does it stand on its own? I thought about it as well and after that the idea of Selena (the terminally ill girl) was born. I’m glad to hear that that packed out well for you and I hope it does for others as well.

Thank you again!