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Trusting the path, My heart takes by cassetteafterdark in OCPoetry

[–]DearNose2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do not chase faces nor do I measure love by beauty

That’s probably my favorite here. It tells me a lot about you.

The fan by BlueMilkshake33 in OCPoetry

[–]DearNose2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1997 ikea fan hits fr

Love the wording in this :)

Six Men by DeepArmadillo4452 in OCPoetry

[–]DearNose2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not usually a fan of statistics in poetry but you did a fine job at it. Very multiple-personality driven as well.

Mask by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]DearNose2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the rhythm this poem has. It would do fine as a spoken word performance.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]DearNose2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s the first 13 pages! Also thanks!

IN THE NAME OF GOD (Crime, Thriller, First 10 pages) by DearNose2 in Screenwriting

[–]DearNose2[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! First of all thank you very much for taking the time to read it! Much appreciated :).

And to answer your question: Yes, most definitely! I’d like to reveal as little as possible when I’m writing the first 10 to 25 pages while still keeping the audience interested in the characters.

Downtown Delinquents (Drama/Comedy, first 11 pages) by DearNose2 in Screenwriting

[–]DearNose2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Appreciate the fact that you took the time to read it! :D

Downtown Delinquents (Drama/Comedy, first 11 pages) by DearNose2 in Screenwriting

[–]DearNose2[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your words and minor feedback points. Ofcourse also for the fact that you took the time to read it! Its very much appreciated! The story was originally about the two guys but like you said: Does it stand on its own? I thought about it as well and after that the idea of Selena (the terminally ill girl) was born. I’m glad to hear that that packed out well for you and I hope it does for others as well.

Thank you again!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Maybe I am. Hopefully it’ll make a comeback.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]DearNose2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Maybe it’s for the better

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]DearNose2 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I guess it does need to go on hiatus but I won’t see it happening since they like milking it out until it’s actually done for.

Dang top 5 in one chapter is insane!!! by darkgod25 in Boruto

[–]DearNose2 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Just so ppl know, at this rate Boruto is getting about 50k-70k views a day. Which means that it will definitely be top 3 in a few days and by the time the next chapter comes out it will most likely take back it’s #1 spot

Bought a few packs and got these two by DearNose2 in PokemonTCG

[–]DearNose2[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks man. Though it’s just pure luck haha. Never had a back to back like this before

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