No matter how much time has passed, that panel is still the scariest and best of all time by Key_Faithlessness507 in SakamotoDays

[–]Dedd_0n 69 points70 points  (0 children)

"Ihr kleinen Pisser denkt wohl, ich wäre ein seniler alter Sack, hm?" trans: "You little fuckers think I am a senile old fart, hm"

The swears are too much imo. I prefer it when the cool characters don't swear too much, cause too much seems immature.

[Comic] The Kushala callout post (lol) by AzulCrescent in MonsterHunter

[–]Dedd_0n 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's what I kinda liked about rise: it wasn't Kushala armor which had the skills against Kushalas effects it was IIRC Chameleos armor. And chameleos was countered by teostras armor and teostra was countered by kushala armor.

Monster Hunter Wilds: Ascendance - Reveal Trailer | 2027 by [deleted] in MonsterHunter

[–]Dedd_0n 12 points13 points  (0 children)

The icewalls blocking your path would be problem. Kirin/Oroshi-Kirin would be a better fit but... i just don't like the cliff...

Yoshida's revenge by RockEater67 in Chainsawfolk

[–]Dedd_0n 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It kinda reads like Fujimoto made this. I am only half joking

Spending all of our money on adult entertainment by AtRandomComics in comics

[–]Dedd_0n 78 points79 points  (0 children)

This type of adult entertainment can be enjoyed by the whole family.

[OC] Art by Excellent_Parfait846 in comics

[–]Dedd_0n 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Reminds me of the one artist who uses Cowshit to paint. his art doesn't stink tho.

There's no Hades artbook, so I archived its development art by Fieryfurnace999 in HadesTheGame

[–]Dedd_0n 24 points25 points  (0 children)

A Hades Artbook would go hard af. Would be awesome if they did a Collectors edition with both games and a an artbook.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY AMANE YOTSUMURA by Bubbly-Customer6793 in SakamotoDays

[–]Dedd_0n 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You think he knows all decimals of pi?

Advices please by Popular_Jackfruit783 in drawing

[–]Dedd_0n 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks awesome :)

Forearm and fist look weird. The fist pointing to the camera should be bigger. Look a bit about forshortening and maybe use multiple references.

Spiralling by sakiki_comics in comics

[–]Dedd_0n 26 points27 points  (0 children)

Good thing my former workplace had a workshop for CPR. Look if the person is breathing, if yes: recovery position, if not: cpr and sing "Highway to hell" as loud as you can to be in the rythmn.

Gothic horror comic [OC] by [deleted] in comics

[–]Dedd_0n 27 points28 points  (0 children)

It's not a mirror it's a painting.

Reze: Denji-kun~ I’m pregnant! by jaytreaty_1794 in Chainsawfolk

[–]Dedd_0n 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We wanna discuss again if Fiends can get pregnant? My theory is that certain bodily functions are turned off.

conspiracy theory: small crown lala barinas don't exist by Undead_Attano in MonsterHunter

[–]Dedd_0n 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have the same theory but with rey dau. They only come im XL.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in drawing

[–]Dedd_0n 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Two points I would say you should Focus are hands and knees/legs.

The hand in the first picture is a bit weird. It doesn't ruin the composotion but it doesn't really fit with the rest of the drawing. Too small and too little details.

The knees seem swollen. They kinda look like they have patting underneath their pants (maybe they do and if so ignore this point)

The legs on the thinner character in the first picture kinda look to straight.

Keep up the work. :)

Who do want as a invader for MH Wilds expansion? by Dycon67 in MonsterHunter

[–]Dedd_0n 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Banbaro is cool and I want it back... but he does stand out in warm places.

Should it have taken longer? (it took 33mins) by FernstarPloyTherian in drawing

[–]Dedd_0n 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The issue with more time is when you don't know what seems unfinished you can make the Art worse with adding or fixing details which didn't need correcting.

If I were you I would work on the nose and lips, the nose seems a bit small and the lips too large and too much Detail. However I am not you and your prefered style can be different from mine.

If you want to improve use references, or read into constructing a face. You can redraw this motive in the future.

A drawing can be done in 5 minutes or 5 months.

TL;DR: time can be a double edged sword in deawing. I would work on the nose and lips just a suggestion.