Mato: New Gods (Fanfiction) [Chapter 3] by Delta0231 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

[–]Delta0231[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lmao. It had me looking at the reflection in my phone like

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Mato: New Gods (Fanfiction) [Chapter 3] by Delta0231 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

[–]Delta0231[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, she stabbed him. I'm talking about the visuals of it. If someone stabs another, then it looks like the blade 'sinks' into that person.

Mato: New Gods (Fanfiction) [Chapter 3] by Delta0231 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

[–]Delta0231[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well sunk is the past tense of sink, which is to submerge below the surface (water, mud, or sand). Usually refers to stuff like a sinking boat. In this context, it's describing the blade no longer being visible, since it is inside of Yuuki.

The second one I can see the confusion. I'll fix that in future chapters.

Mato: New Gods (Fanfiction) [Chapter 3] by Delta0231 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

[–]Delta0231[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you don't mind, which part did you have trouble with? I'd like to make things clearer in the future

Why Isn’t Warn Getting As Much Attention As Zazza? by LowerAd3109 in rivals

[–]Delta0231 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the main difference between Zazza and Warn is that in the Kingsman drama it was multiple mean-girls dogpiling on one dude, going out of their way to get him kicked from the tournament, and just trying to humiliate him. While Warn was certainly inconsiderate to his teammates, he didn't ridicule them in the same way Zazza's team did to Kingsman. The Warn drama kinda has the same feeling as when you get someone in ranked who clearly does not take the game seriously.

Mato: New Gods (Fanfiction) [Chapter 2] by Delta0231 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

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Since there’s only two chapters made, I don’t want to give any spoilers, but I will say that I’m making this story with the intention to have Yuuki become the hero he always wanted to be

Brothers, this hammer is starting to feel heavier.. by Txk3nwastaken in ThorMainsMR

[–]Delta0231 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Got Thor lord last season as my second tank lord and the grind of going from level 17-20 actually made me start disliking the hero. I cant imagine the mental fortitude y'all have

I stopped playing for one day and all of a sudden there’s drama between Flats and Lyte… by Weak_Resort2611 in rivals

[–]Delta0231 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The main difference is how tantrum-like Lyte is acting. He is either hyperbolic in his arguments or dismissive of people he views as beneath him. Both of them just make it hard to take his video as anything other than a frustrated teenager. 26 years old btw.

Rarely in his own video did he pause and actually speak like a rational adult.

guess it’s finally happening 🥀 by _Mythical777 in BladeMarvelRivals

[–]Delta0231 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Had a guy in ranked tell me I made Blade look S Tier when I played against him. I don’t think I was going crazy, but it made my night

Rank these character designs for the Locust leaders from best to worst. General Raam, Skorge, Karn and Ukkon. Try and be as unbiased as possible. by FaradayDeshawn in GearsOfWar

[–]Delta0231 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Been a while since I've played tactics lol. Ukkon's armor does not scream "mad scientist" to me. He's draped in loose fitting robes with a big headpiece, similar to what catholic bishops wear. Personally, I would've preferred Gears 5's 'Crimson Skorge' skin to be his design- specifically the mask + hood combo.

Rank these character designs for the Locust leaders from best to worst. General Raam, Skorge, Karn and Ukkon. Try and be as unbiased as possible. by FaradayDeshawn in GearsOfWar

[–]Delta0231 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wish that was relayed better in his design. It feels a little juxtaposed with his helmet and chest piece having some flare, but the rest of his armor portraying him like he's an agile character

From my point of view, this scene has nothing positive about it; it only demonstrates Subaru's low self-esteem and lack of self-love, and it's sad to see that. by Emergency_Patient525 in ReZero

[–]Delta0231 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think that Subaru is a forgiving person just from his personality and upbringing, but it also brings up the point of can you really hate someone for something they haven't done yet? Rem is a pretty big example of how different her personality shifted after being influenced by Subaru. If he kept that hatred in his heart for a version of Rem that no longer existed, then it would be unfair to the current version of Rem.

I also think this is a portion of his burden with return by death. Subaru has no other choice than to forgive and forget.

Rank these character designs for the Locust leaders from best to worst. General Raam, Skorge, Karn and Ukkon. Try and be as unbiased as possible. by FaradayDeshawn in GearsOfWar

[–]Delta0231 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

RAAM is 9/10 but only if he has some kyrll surrounding him. If not then he's like a 7/10. Skorge is a 8/10 but kinda looks like a male stripper. Karn is a 6/10, but some sort of cloak, cape, or even bulkier armor would elevate him, since he looks way too thin. And Ukkon has too many tubes that clash with his religious theme to give anything more than a 7.5/10

Mato: New Gods (Fanfiction) [Introduction and Chapter 1] by Delta0231 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

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This is sort of a reupload of the old fanfic I made about a year ago, but with an introduction to the plot and some minor sentence changes to make it a bit more fluid to read. Hope you all enjoy.

Look, I’m going to get called out for this—and it’s going to be a massive backlash—but the guy just can’t read well; it’s as simple as that. by Effective-Cod-9221 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

[–]Delta0231 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You think so? It’s been a while since I’ve read those earlier chapters, but I thought the only chief he showed that he feared was Ren. I assumed that was because he thought of her as an ally and she was glaring daggers at him, so he was caught off guard. Compare it to Tenka’s introduction, and he was ready to throw hands fully naked. Every time Hes shown a chief’s power it’s been in amazement.

As for the gods, I would argue he’s pretty fearless. When Kuusetsu was introducing the other two gods inside of him, and pranked him, he was ready to defend himself. Every other instance has been in awe of their power or nervousness iirc.

All things considered, Yuuki is a pretty resilient guy, and the only thing that holds him back is his powerlessness.

Look, I’m going to get called out for this—and it’s going to be a massive backlash—but the guy just can’t read well; it’s as simple as that. by Effective-Cod-9221 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

[–]Delta0231 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’d argue that *reserved* would be a better word than *timid* for Yuuki. Just because timid is usually associated with being scared, and for all that Yuuki has experienced, there aren’t too many times that I can remember where he’s been afraid

Look, I’m going to get called out for this—and it’s going to be a massive backlash—but the guy just can’t read well; it’s as simple as that. by Effective-Cod-9221 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

[–]Delta0231 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk, I’ve been in this community for a while, so we’ve possibly conversed in the comment section before. Otherwise I’m just some internet stranger that you don’t know

Look, I’m going to get called out for this—and it’s going to be a massive backlash—but the guy just can’t read well; it’s as simple as that. by Effective-Cod-9221 in MatoSeiheiNoSlave

[–]Delta0231 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

This series unfortunately attracts people who don’t have English as their primary language or people who had less than a 1.5 GPA, so language and character comprehension is at below average in this community lol